why does it matter if I give in to my struggles.//
just buckle under the pressure and crack like arthritis knuckles.//
I find pain humble, double the hurt but half the trouble, of seeking joy.//
peace is just a cheap ploy to make us believe it can be achieved.//
but knowing it can't brings more ease than bein' vexed on E's.//
an' if think you blessed you've been seriously decieved.//
a blessing's somethin' to bring order through fear of a more powerful being.//
but being aware of the lack of god brings on corruption disease and the creation of bombs.//
which in turn is creatin' alarm and causing countries who were once allies, to erupt in war.//
so what's any of this for.. why should I try if I just have to conform.//

Why should we behave?
why be a slave?
try to be your own person..
you just get put away....

this is what I'm talkin' about, freedom is somethin' we've all forgoten about.//
sure we're free to say what we please, but that's only part of the freedom I really need.//
I want to be able to release my negativity in ways that otherwise would be considered singularity.//
I want to stand alone through more than words, an' actions just get me into trouble/ like our version of freedom is cursed.//
the constitution is just a set of rules, that's sets our roles, personally it's absurd.//
I'd much rather if I was self governed, and not controled by wealth power.//
I'd melt cowards who hide behind lincoln prints.// (cash)
skip away from ink in pens and slay these fat cats with rings an' fists.//
but for now I'm askin.. why don't I have the freedom to do all of this.//

--hook--

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nice I like that it was a tad simplistic but the delivery was coo...keep doin whatcha do holler

thanx, I plan on it... lol.. uppin'

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uppin'

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Damn... kid, you know what i'm gonna say. Too hot for RB... damn, you got skills, most def. Stay up...

thanx bro.. trust I'm workin' on a record right now, but I just moved out my moms so all my shit's still there.. otherwise I'd be postin' up audios.. uppin'

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uppin'

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nice piece man i gota say the flow was aight, it was a pretty unique topic, questioning things.. some good lines

why does it matter if I give in to my struggles.//
just buckle under the pressure and crack like arthritis knuckles.//

and a good line in itself was..

find pain humble, double the hurt but half the trouble, of seeking joy.//

keep spittin..
peace out...

thx yo, uppin' this shit...

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uppin'... sleepers suck balls.. so if you sleep on this you suck balls....

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i liked it ...some work is needed but we all need work so cant complain you im hitten you with acollab verse if you like peep your pm side

lol i dont wanna suck no balls, so uh, the delevery was a bit shorted, i liked the duel and triple ryhmes per line in te beggining, good drop, btw the unanswered enigma is why, congrats onm gettin out ur moms, good luck

wtf kapone.. was that a mamma diss, or were you say'n congrats on movin' out... whatever... yea, it's a bit of a stagered delivery over all.. but the way the beat goes for it it works good...

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nive peice...i liked the flow and everything...only critisicm is that you need to get more complex, but that shit was disease dunny..keep spittin.in my opinion you one of the illest on open mic...one

yea yea.. that's what I'm say'n dawg...

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