RULES:

10 - 20 Lines MAX
3 - 0 KO or first to 5 Winz
No hatin, crew, or dickrydin Votes
You Spit First And I'll Reply Asap

Pz Bruv

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Aight look

I’ma start this verse out with somethin nice/
You remid me more of Tupac than you do Vanilla Ice/
Not because your flow but because you’ll be more loved dead/
Dog, its painfully obvious I’m already in your head/
Hey man, my fear is its too lonely up in here/
Better have another beer so maybe your thoughts aint so queer/
Thats right I now your secret bout little boys like Jacko/
Ask em to play with your VD infested toy son you’s a whacko/
Now instead of callin you gay I’ll just put a dagger in your heart/
You got a better chance spittin lines bought at Wal-Mart/
Sorry to break it to ya but you’re a second rate emcee/
Mr. T would beat Rocky before you could contend with me/
Fuck 187 records your record should say 1 win 8 losses and 7 no decisions/
So fuck quil-spit and the beef you got with King Chrit cause your punches are missin/
Going against the king you’s nothin but a jester/
See I’m the hustler you’s just a verse molester/
I’m holding court and you’re about to be convicted/
Taught your flow some gymnastics, bitch I flipped it/
So before I finish you off lets take some time to reflect
Look in the mirror and you see the head of a crew thats barely even won yet/

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Aight Look!!!

Your rhymin like your on steroids spittin shit your lungs cant handle//1
I'm gonna dismantle your rhyme coz i got the world in my hands son//2
Go and light another candle if you think i'm like Tupac, but i aint dead i'm all switched on//3
I've already come back to life once and now i'm a truly blessed don//4

Did you think i was gonna do a fuckin gospel song well check this son you got it all wrong//5
I'm in the "rap game" 100 miles long, on my fuckin pedestal screamin like King Kong//6
You fuckin retard kickin in like your strong, I'll smash you down to earth bring your crew along//7
Lets all have a sing-song about you gettin murdered Like Lee Chong//8
I'm like fuckin ping pong if you hit me away i'll come back with more speed than removing your girls thong//9
It comes down easier than eatin Dog in hong Kong, I got more hits than Dre and Nate Dogg//10

Fuck a fuckin homecoming dance theres more chance of finding of dick in your pants//11
as the crowd stands up and chants you choke quiker than a stangled band//12
I got the mic in my hand time to cut you up lyricly like i'm spittin out a lance//13
Move to the South of France they like cowards and you'll get a second chance//14
You wont get one here your time is up sit back down without shitting your pants//15

Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19
as the judges come along and throw votes in this direction....

Uppin

***Fuck a fuckin homecoming dance theres more chance of finding of dick in your pants//11
as the crowd stands up and chants you choke quiker than a stangled band//12
I got the mic in my hand time to cut you up lyricly like i'm spittin out a lance//13
Move to the South of France they like cowards and you'll get a second chance//14
You wont get one here your time is up sit back down without shitting your pants//15

***Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19
as the judges come along and throw votes in this direction....



Those 2 verses still had odd lines lol . . .if you have 5 lines that rhyme try to come up with a 6th one so its easy . . .


also to both of you try to think more "outside the box", cause when u do that, and get good at it, thats when u come up with punches and wordplay that make people say "Oh Shit . . ."


just a suggestion . . .



I gotta give this battle to Chrit better wordplay and more mature punches . . .


Keep elevatin y'all . . .

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

I think Quil came stronger he had better punches i think he could work on his flow a lil bit but my vote=Quil Spit


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1 - 1

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vote quik he came alot harder than chrit better flow better punches and overall better lines...

Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19

these lines by quik took them...1

ps - can yall vote for the battle wit me n nightdemise in ellite front lines...(polls closed vote ina post...) please ..thx 1

yeah going with quik on this one but it was close
reasons as said above

can u vote on my battle in elite front lines i'd appreciate it cos it's gettin slept on

I agree theze linez were the deciding factor:

Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19

VOTE=Quik-$pit

4 - 1 Quik-$pit

Uppin

gotta give my shit to Quil, i thinkhis shit came strong though, but quil iz juzt a ill nigga-


I'm like fuckin ping pong if you hit me away i'll come back with more speed than removing your girls thong
^^^had me rollin^^^^^

Move to the South of France they like cowards and you'll get a second chance//14
You wont get one here your time is up sit back down without shitting your pants//15

Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19
as the judges come along and throw votes in this direction
^^^you had tha flow on this one^^^^^

nice battle


VOTE=Quil-$pit

Quil gqts my vote yall
i could feel his more

6 - 1 Quik-$pit

Uppin Votes

murda.........

***Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19
as the judges come along and throw votes in this direction....

super hot verse^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^



vote = quik

you really need to stop battlin lightweights............

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7 - 1 Quik-$pit

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