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Old 04-03-03, 08:24 PM   #1
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LaSt ShIt 4 2NigHt !peep dis!

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i spit ma lyrical tactics like a strand of elastics//
and condemn all unworthy emcees 2 dey muthafuckin caskit//
ma vocab iz so enhanced, dey say ma brain iz IBM compatible//
lyrically ma words is mo destructive den a Black Panther radical//
I percisely split linez like a fire drill at lunch time//
ma mouth iz always thirstin to swallow emcees like its crunch time//
ma lyrical skillz is beyond safe boundries//
im lyrically inclined 2 tumble dry emcees like dey ma laundry//
i write 2 relieve ma mind and all of ma tension//
and im lyrically known 2 put ma demeanors on suspension//
lyrically i castirate niggaz like a muthafuckin deamon//
cuz i lyrically cut off dudes breathin circulation without no reason//
im a psychotic lyrical menace 2 dis fuckin society//
ma wordplay and vocab comes in all shapes and varieties//
it disguist me 2 c so many fake emcees//
so what ill do is disguise maself and rip dem in lyrical combat and do maself a good deed//

uppin 4 comments now!!!!!!
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Old 04-04-03, 11:37 AM   #2
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zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....wake up yall sum fuckin feedback shit!
where ma MP niggaz @??????
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Old 04-04-03, 11:47 AM   #3
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sup hommie... a'ight spit.. flow an' what not was pretty tight.. I'd like ta see some mad creative shit come from you yo, you got mad skillz but rhymin' a played topic.... ne-way.. peace dawg
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Old 04-04-03, 12:28 PM   #4
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iight zeen nuff respect ........^^^^^uppin fo mo comments now.
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Old 04-04-03, 02:58 PM   #5
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this iz a good rhymes but sum of yur shit dun make sense, and u keep sayin lyrically this....but overall it was dope
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Old 04-04-03, 05:01 PM   #6
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wtf......i only said "lyrically" 6 tymes!
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Old 04-05-03, 01:59 PM   #7
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^ LMFAO!
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Old 04-05-03, 02:05 PM   #8
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this was a sub-par drop....
elevate your mind man...write about something that people can actualy relate to....
why do you up this for comments?...you need to improve your writing skills...there's the coment of the day
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Old 04-05-03, 02:17 PM   #9
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wtf......i only said "lyrically" 6 tymes!


Thats a lot...

Ok, first, read this, and don't come back with some "fuck you" shit or anything...Learn from whats being said.

Listen to "-opia".

The whole "lyrical" this "lyrically" that is 1- Play, 2- Old, 3- "Newbie"ish, 4. Boring...

Basically listen to what opia said.
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Old 04-05-03, 02:19 PM   #10
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BLAH BLAH BLAH..........all that comes to mind when i read these bullshit ass boring rhymes
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Old 04-05-03, 06:46 PM   #11
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i believe that MicDareall said it best...lmfao
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Old 04-05-03, 07:29 PM   #12
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bun u u fuckin hatas... yall fagets probably couldnt do betta.
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Old 04-05-03, 09:56 PM   #13
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bun u u fuckin hatas... yall fagets probably couldnt do betta.


Gettin ragged on...and you stutter? lmao

And what did I say? "Ok, first, read this, and don't come back with some "fuck you" shit or anything...Learn from whats being said." ...And what did you say? "bun u u fuckin hatas... yall fagets probably couldnt do betta." ...Kid, grab a book...read...smarten up...and maybe then you can come back.
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Old 04-05-03, 10:01 PM   #14
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yeah dogg, they tryna help u lol
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Old 04-06-03, 04:58 AM   #15
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lmfao
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