haven't dropped in here in ages lol


the criminal boss, suicidal and subminal thoughts
my pulse will neva pause for a lyrical cause
anger mixed with danger makes me dangerous
feel the rush as i spit to clamp this game up
da lyrical, mass serial, pass killa, betta than faggots n average rap spitters
crush contenderz constantly, honestly i rip mics the hottest and ebonic-ly
murder katz that mumble wack rapz
my shit cracks n connects like louisville batz
respect the rookie with the veteran stats
these crews suck, i could give two fucks, whos all in ya staff
herbs making threads like "BLAH BLAH BLAH RECRUITIN'"
i-net thugz, making "beef" to screens on computers
it seems useless, to see the illest verbalist crewless,
but i rather roam alone than wit these cocky-head-newbies
even the so-called vets need reality checks ...fuck it sue me
they so-soft acting like these romantic movies
frantic pharses breaking these fraglie groupies
herbs hang off loosely when im spittin the verbal uzi

don't lose me, or get lost searching..............whoops u just lost me
i was unda-rated, now the whiz reinstated,
seems like lil fizz and these mcs related
lil kidz wit no type of lyrical intergration
hada commit a sIn just to prove the greatness
came wit direkt threatz to murder the PROfake-ness
former light weight champ niggah! u can hate this
woulda be heavy if it wasn't for dickrydin statements

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D.L.W

nice spit
liked the flow in it and i hear what ur sayin

the criminal boss, suicidal and subminal thoughts
my pulse will neva pause for a lyrical cause

anger mixed with danger makes me dangerous
murder katz that mumble wack rapz
my shit cracks n connects like louisville batz
respect the rookie with the veteran stats


those were some dope lines in it

yea u had sum nice lines

ummmm

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D.L.W

man dis wuz ill start to finish,u had me hooked fo real.Everythang flowed smooth as hell and u knew xactly wut to put out there,not jus spittin words 2getha.U can skool sum of these "so-called vets" hah.Keep postin,Stay ^
-Avi

hah, thanx u lots

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D.L.W

"the criminal boss, suicidal and subminal thoughts
my pulse will neva pause for a lyrical cause"

I know fgee already used these lines
but they were some of my favorite too
I really liked the feeling in them
incredibly awesome

ps check out my "7 deadly rap"
thx

i will, thanx dawg

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D.L.W

[qoute]anger mixed with danger makes me dangerous[/quote]

OoOoOoHhHhH! Me Likey! Danger Anger Dangererous...Oww that was good.


That made laugh a bit.

Good work dog.

thanx homie

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D.L.W

Nice verse dis bit was good

"da lyrical, mass serial, pass killa, betta than faggots n average rap spitters
crush contenderz constantly, honestly i rip mics the hottest and ebonic-ly"

word up thanx man

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D.L.W

Nice shit kid......i usually get bored as hell readin these self promotin type drops but this was tight all the way through