i just wish in ma life, i would live to not be concerned wit shit/
get rich of the mic, n' earn so much money that i could burn it/
and not worry, cuz i got strategies to get rich/
ma desire is like a scratch that's craving to be itched/
but in ma life, it ain't like dat, niggaz always gotta disagree/
now their momma's callin me, askin why i put dem out of their misery/
ma ex callin me, says she pregnant, n' she want me to handle ma business/
few years lata, parents project strucken, they had to cancel Christmas/
its tha world against me, sometimes i feel like a fugitive/
running from tha truth, but still, wanna know what ma future is/
waking up in tha middle of tha night, from plottin' out to many tasks/
ma uniform to work, is black leather, dime sacks, and a ski mask/
tryin to make amends, wit my only friend, a bottle of remy martin/
i feel frustrated, like a fueled car, that just ain't startin'/
So I sell a little of that dro, yo nigga its all tha same/
parents holding their heads in shame, teachers calling me to blame/
what am i to do but just lie in ma room, holdin that vodka in ma cup/
and i'm grasping that cross on ma chest, hoping that i would just wake up/

yo grimey won good topic and alright flow, but i think ur missin somethin dawg! u need 2 try sumethin new maybe dat will help u 2 elevate as an emcee!

well it was a great topic... it was missing something... ? The beat.. it was missing a beat... no matter what when you read something the good one's you can almost feel a beat in it... I couldn't feel your beat.... find a beat to the words... and if that's your style why change it right? But you should elevate your style... add more.. get more into the feeling of it.. OoNnEe

nice drop son, id like to see this in audio keep up the good shit

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nice post homie.U put sum feelin in2 dat one i can tell.U jus speakin about wutchu kno,and not makin sh!t up like a lotta otha emcees.Im uppin dis for ya.Stay ^
-Avi