rules r like this 10 bars max (2 lines = 1 bar) post by 2am eastern time enough time (its 12 now) check in and u better not no sho me check in first so i kno u wont no sho me.....1

here an i'll show..i always do...so we have two hours...i'am ready now..damn..

aight spit first.....ill spit right after u first to 5 votes 3 = KO.....if polls close then votes go by posts.....1

this is closed

aight good shyt gimme like a lil ....1

When I spit the-heat-churns/
I spit "flames" that'll give ya mother fuckin' bloodcells "3rd degree-burns"/

Wit-each-verse I send hot-lines-flowin'/
To knock ya growth in counter clockwise-motion/

Die-hopin.. Cuz against the vemon-I-harness/
This bitch couldn't get a "W" in an "m&m-harvest"/

You win?.. thats like sayin Scarface-is-hot.. or sayin he makes scense/
Amaculant masculants wit tactics stacked to break-heads/
You can't "verbally-spar" bitch, you'll "never rise"/

I take the kids gloves off to sympathize, at record time, before you even have time you have your stop watch synchronized/

I've been fucked wit, but if you try then you gettin' "burried in plastic"/
And your carcas disposed of in a tub of "sulphuric acid"/

My shit is "verbally drastic", you a fuckin'-fake like "Cinemax porn-shows"/
I'll shread apart your flesh with razors and braid your intestines with "corn-rows"/

Im gonna rip somethin ILL on this motherfucker, he came from the HILLS/
this fags over here tryin to trip on PILLS that be CUM-FILLED/

come on!! this guy thinks he can really be SOMETHIN?/
i could win this battle simply by postin NOTHIN/

You like a "leprachan" "sittin' at the end" of "a rainbow"/
The only chance of ya winnin' is if ya "find a devil" with the "face of an angel"/

voooootes

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Yeah both drops were good but my votes gotta go to X Ecution, there were jsut a few lines like:

My shit is "verbally drastic", you a fuckin'-fake like "Cinemax porn-shows"/
I'll shread apart your flesh with razors and braid your intestines with "corn-rows"/
&
Die-hopin.. Cuz against the vemon-I-harness/
This bitch couldn't get a "W" in an "m&m-harvest"/

That was some nice ish man, got it with them punches..

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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I thought it was a decent battle. 360, we all know who you are battling, you dont have to say 'x-ecution' so many times in your verse, that got repetitive and annoying. I liked X's drop more.. so..

Vote - X

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aight thats 1-0 offical if mead post in the polls itll count as 2-0 for now 1-0......more votes please 1

This was an aight battle

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you just a casualty ..basically "x-ecution" is like a "hyphen"..dashed-"automatically"..how you trying to free-arms without you having sleeves? .....4
now i'll gradually-crush-in-ya-brains-cavity til it suffers more "stomps' than kirk-franklyn-beats when my timbs connect where ya lyrinax-be ......5
^^Nice use of punches wordplay Syntax

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I take the kids gloves off to sympathize, at record time, before you even have time you have your stop watch synchronized/

I've been fucked wit, but if you try then you gettin' "burried in plastic"/
And your carcas disposed of in a tub of "sulphuric acid"/
^^very good use of wordplay kinda was low on tha pucnhes

Breakdown
punches- 380
multis-390
creative-x
wordplay-x
syntax-380
overall-380

Take it or leave it

YO DO YOU CATS PLACE YA VOTES SOLEY ON PUNCHS... MULTI'S,METAPHORES,WORDPLAY,FLOW--THAT SHIT SUPPOSED TO COUNT ALSO...WHAT ABOUT CONSISTANCY...DID YOU MAINTAIN YA INTENSITY THE WHOLE VERSE..CAUSE CATS ARE SAYING HE HAD A COUPLE GOOD PUNCHS WHICH IS TRUE..BUT IT SUPPOSED TO BE WHO HAD THE BEST OVER ALL VERSE..
LIKE ONE CAT SAID --YOU ALL KNOW WHO I'AM BATTLING..SOUNDS BORDER LINE DICK RIDING TO ME...ANYWAY..

still 1-0 offically mooooore vooootes 1

Man, punches is the main aspect of Battling, if you have the better punches then sure, you're gonna have the upper hand but yeah if you have a shit rhyme scheme and no metaphors or similies then it will lack but man, aint no dick ridin at all man, this is the first time I ever replied to one of X's battles and as you can see he's already had 12.. X beat you in all aspects...
By the way X I did vote on the poll......

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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