i love eva

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good drop sand hear what ur saying
flow was good bit choppy in places and rest was good man
those dam women..........

this is what caused u to be so called "emotionless"....kid u got alot to shit to learn in life if this is the worst thing to ever happen to u.........U need to be thankful this is your greatest pain .....not cryin bout the shit

your an idiot. maybe your gay and dont know what its like to lose girls. well who cares your still an idiot.

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kid.......losin a muthafuckin girl that u "started" to love aint shit in life.......shit your the stupid ass kids id love to take on a fuckin tour and show what havin a hard life really is...let u see what reall pain in life is......theres a book out there called "Are You out there GOD?".......its written by a nun that runs a home for kidz.... u really need to read that shit.......then maybe ud understand how much of a bitch u sound like whinin cuz u got dumped by one muthafuckin girl in life......its pain....i understand u need to release it and shit u got sum nice rhymes....but to tell me that shit makes u the "emotionless" kid u r like u said in that other post is ignorant

already read it my friend.
i didnt say one girl has been the cause.
how about. multiple girfriends.
my mother. and lots of other factors.
its much more metaphorical than you might think.
woman was the downfall of man.
man was also the downfall of himself though.
but you dont know what you are talking about.

*i got that book in the mail. * haha

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by .Sand.
Mccdarrell. I am emotionless. i dont take anything in.......

.......[B]this is the first time that i have asked for a topic. i usually write about the same one. the one that drove me to my emotionless state QUOTE]

Now read ya fuckin wordz kid......"the one that drove me to my emotionless state"...so shut the fuck up u did say it was one!!!

i never said it wasnt girls my friend.
its isnt this recent incident that drove me to it.
now quit talking to me.

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Well...I know how you feeling bud...Like my drop I did a bit ago called "Sluts"...so yeah, totally feel what your talking about.

For some reason I got past what your feeling. Like...now I lose a girl, its no longer a lost. I wouldn't really say its a good thing...It shows that I have been through to much shit. I'm sick of it, so I choose not to be hurt. Which I'm still not sure is a good thing...

You could do one thing to try to get her back. Pretend she doesn't exist. I know its hard...but maybe it will work. I don't know, just trying to help.

Keep your head up duke...

thx man. im over it now. appreciated feed.

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this was a hot drop. it reminds me of mah last girl cuz i had these same feelins. anyway keep reppin. one.

goddamn you half japanese girls, you do it to me every time.
girls suck. unless you have one, then they rock. but then they leave. and they suck again. or they suck someone else. that can make you wanna kill kill kill. anywho, nice spit. every straight male can relate. gay ones too.

thanks man

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Despite wat everyone been sayin bout this its got sum nice rhymes and ya got sum emotional shit out there. ya flow diddnt always work so maybe work on that but generally quite nice. I do sorta agree that theres more shit in life to worry about than if you've had rough experiences wit those who love you but then again in everyones world you are the centre of it.

ANYWAY CUZ RETURN THE FAVOUR AND CHECK MINE BANGKOK BUISNESS AIGHT PEACE

yo, hey man, let see... ok... yo I gottah respect that this is from the heart and shit... props for putting that out, being real and not gettin embarresed of what peeps may think.... but, lyrically... this could of been better.... it was pretty simple to me... but I guess, when writing emotional pieces... it's abit hard to focus on skill... oh and this flowed pretty good man...
I recently wrote something like this... called "Broken", if you see it check it out... You'll see I agree wit what you saying...
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