Up in the dragons LAYER
Im surrounded by PRAYERS i found myself suspended in MID-AIR...
spinin motionless saw KIDS SCARED, Serpents serve as my SERVENTS..
cruize the block in the SUB URBAN, i touch minds like brain SURGEONS...
u can't RUN the DISTANCE, mind frame virtually NON EXISTANT..
get close the revolver spins at an INSTANT...all praise due to my BRILIANCE..
i'll bitch slap the crowd just to keep their heads RINGING..
Multi Coulered sky, whipin down blazin Asteroids...
Extraterstrials land on earth givin birth to Androids...
That walk around in Human Skin as Deploys waitin to Employ unbareable Noiyz//
to..
Blast the planet to Rocks untill Every Document holdin evidenz in DESTROYED...
Imma Prophet on a Wack MC Murda Assignment, My brains Traped in Solitary Confinement...
I treat you like Play dough, shape you, bake you and Break you...
We Dispersing your Whole Alliance like Cyclones, I kick back on my THRONE...
While Scientist examine my DNA and Make CLONES dat Spray bullets like COLOGNE...
Even Half the man i am is Too much for yall ALONE...
Drop Bars suffering from Paralzed membranes, behold a mind of Arcane...
My Domain in Dearranged, Check the way i explain the Pain but fuck it...
Im Stricktly underground rap cuz my Styles are Strait out the BASEMENT...
Prolific lines lay Adjacent from this Microphone placement...
I React with Violence to this Poisonous FRAGRANCE...
Im facing sarcastic illusions, steel frictions release drastic FUSIONS...
Drive by intentions, phantom of the opera CRUZIN, rifle on the CUSHIONS...
Reign a 3 Dimensional realm of the 4 elements...
the poisen pen inks down assaults to the mind thats RELENTLESS.....
Smackin verbs and adjectives senseless, sleep in a bed of electrical FENCES...
i'll pound u into FRACTIONS, my words speak louder than ya ACTIONS...
optic evidence to the display of perfected Opulence...
black market merchants sold me a Murder LISENCE...

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man this shit is ill well done knightshade brother

"optic evidence to the display of perfected Opulence...
black market merchants sold me a Murder LISENCE..."

I really like how these lines sounded
the multi in the top one is awesome
like the serious take in an oldschool style

PS peep my "7 deadly rap"
I would appreciate ur thoughts
thx

Wtf is with CAPS on some words? Trying to point out shit punch's?...Newb

read the first 4 lines and stopped....that stopp and start bullshit makin no sense....its annoyin to read this type of shit......ya rhymin for the sake of rhymin not givin a damn if one statement has shit to do wit the others....its fuckin retarted...
ex.
"spinin motionless saw KIDS SCARED, Serpents serve as my SERVENTS..
cruize the block in the SUB URBAN, i touch minds like brain SURGEONS"

aight first off how can u spin motionless.....second.......whats the point of sayin u got kids scared and serphants as servents in the same line then follow it up talkin bout cruizin a burban.......shits jus stupid