"Too Much To Stomache"

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She wasn`t aiming for this - So, how dare they accuse,
her of screwing dudes, just to gain what she basically had to lose . .
She wasn`t spreading her thighs to guys, for thrills and cheap highs,
she loved him dearly, but clearly he was a lie . .
It was her choice, she made up her mind, final decision,
but it isn't that choice they hate, it`s the lack of her vision . .
She can`t see past the present, but the future is yesterday,
unless she confesses her emotional ties, she`s best to stay . .
On neutral ground - That clown was bound to be found,
to be screwing around town, that hound will only bring her down . .
It`s not worth a life, ultimately it`s not worth the strife,
of cutting your heart out, and gutting yourself with a knife . .
They try to explain, the pain she put herself through,
for this man who, obviously didn`t care, was dumb to do . .
But she`s screaming the worse curse words heard by most ears,
they`re ducking and dodging, waiting until the coast`s clear . .
She won`t listen, their speeches slur together,
because to her, they just ramble nonsense until she feels better . .
She doesn`t feel like cussing, she`d rather talk it out,
but how do you tell your folks the truth without them walking out . .
Fuck it, she`s alone, she can deal with the decision,
to have her body invaded, with a small knife and an incision . .
But deep down she`s scared, a child - It just hit her,
that all the love and potential life was just flushed down the shitter . .

that's wrd.

yo man that rhyme was really good. keep that shit up. ---one love----

thats was some pac like stuff lowd, good to see an rb vet showing those young cats how its done. great imagery, good rhymes laced with multis and original to boot.

keep on posting fella.

1ne

tight drop lowd,nice rhymes all round,liked the topic foreal.

peep my shit on open my sometime...
bismillah

as everyone else said this was tight. ya flow was straight and the topic really well handled. sum good imagery in there.

She won`t listen, their speeches slur together,
because to her, they just ramble nonsense until she feels better

tight 2 bars that, really understood wat u were saying. only thing maybe you could o is up ya vocab a bit but its still tight wivout it so wateva.

ANYWAY RETURN THE FAVOUR CHECK MINE BANGKOK BUSINESS