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Old 04-08-03, 08:46 AM   #1
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W2 Mic Check [0-0] VS Tru Liez [0-0]

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Old 04-08-03, 09:51 AM   #2
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10 minute keystyle, all i had time for....


Mark an X on true liez cause that’s the destination for the bombsite…/
Skills ignite, as in battles ur surely dropping like panties on prom night…/
You cant calm fright, I swing with punches that you cant compete with…/
Have your face hit the concrete quick, you winning? Complete myth…/
Beef with me? Retreat discreetly before you feel defeat from this elite…/
best chance is to press ctr alt dlt, ur face is hit as punches excrete…/
Mistreat this fag, and treat em like a porn mag the way I bust over em…/
Fussed in disgust I’ll have your head combust, then bust lead over em…/
You’ll need a 4-leaf clover stem and then you might gain some luck…/
You get no thumbs up, n like abusive moms I’ll leave this bum struck…/
Garbage lines you got from dump trucks, you don’t stand a chance…/
Tactics too advanced you get scared when I simply plant the stance…/
Lance at hand slices ur gland as blood continues to flow when ruptured…/
Attack your structure, as shots left your bulletproof vest punctured…/
Have your face disturbed as I kick superb verbs that’s untouchable…/
Face to the curb, feet manage to smash your teeth, I’m unstoppable…/

finish him:
like the way a pig flys, you beating me is true liez.../
cause like a christmas present...im packin a big surprise.../
ill break yur nose, and crush yur face...cops take identification pics..and yur ready for the pose..leave ya blood sprayed, like a can of mace.../


btich, lets see ya get outta this one
 
Old 04-08-03, 03:11 PM   #3
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Check it even if ur soul was nike u would still lose/
I create flows clowing this child like a carnival cruise/
Dicks like you aint even worth beatin cuz ur so wack/
U sodamn insane i got u hidin in bushs from my attack/
Ur 50 styles will never change off many mens dick/
Nigga aint seein my bars as if he was a blind convict/
Someone check his mic quality it seems to be low/
His mind should be the theory of the losing logo/
How can u fish when u aint got no hookz on ur linez/
Ur verse lacks mental structure its holy and not devine/
Now i understand why yall named the homocide crew/
The 187 heads fien for X'z cuz there asses heros ja rule/
U an me will never be cool so just stay one of my fans/
I left u beat why u tryin to now be my right hand man/
As charlotte u couldnt put a intrestin twist on the web/


first off dont call me a bitch, and secondly get ur crew to answer to my crews call out

and if anyone needs a bar explained i will glady link the connection between Mic Check and the bar
 
Old 04-08-03, 03:51 PM   #4
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oh yea an he lost to mind theory so shouldnt it be 0-1 not 0-0
 
Old 04-08-03, 05:02 PM   #5
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you mean 1-1 and no...that was the R.B.L.L. only counts towards the league...
second its a battle, its how i do.....
third, who the fuck are you?, i dont even know you, until this battle took place.

so keep yur mouth shut and yur hands crossed (along with yur legs)...cause when i call you a bitch and u take it personally...aiight then be that way, we can never be cool..its yur decision not mine.

another thing, we see it, but maybe we got something better to do than battle wack crews.....
anyways..it aint my desicion.

Last edited by MiC ChEcK : 04-08-03 at 05:04 PM.
 
Old 04-08-03, 05:51 PM   #6
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Ok... vote: Mic Check...


Mic... better than any verse I've peeped from you... multis saved you... punches were ok... but enough to win... flow was pretty good...

"Have your face hit the concrete quick, you winning? Complete myth…/"

that was the hottest line you had...



Tru lies... blah... flow ok... punches BLAH... There are no quoteables in your verse... at all... sorry dunny... You gotta learn to set up punches... gotta learn alot actually but... you will... Good luck...




vote: Mic Check...
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Old 04-08-03, 06:25 PM   #7
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LoL mic check that was humorous and avalon i respect ur vote even tho some of what u said was not tru-

i actully have punchs u just have to think about them from start like my first bar for instance, i used the second part of his name in the line but u would have to understand my verse to truly see that
 
Old 04-08-03, 07:01 PM   #8
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mic check...havent peeped your shit before but you
came off slow, and some played lines like whoa...

the panty on prom nite, ive used that before...about
2 years ago when RB started LOL

your flow and wordplay was nice, dont get me wrong, and
u lacked multis


Tru Liez...you had some funnny punches, original, and
that saved yoe...heres what i liked...

create flows clowing this child like a carnival cruise/
Nigga aint seein my bars as if he was a blind convict/
How can u fish when u aint got no hookz on ur linez/..could worded it better, but made me laugh
As charlotte u couldnt put a intrestin twist on the web/...thats classic, that was HOT

Vote- Tru


OnE
 
Old 04-08-03, 10:56 PM   #9
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mic check:

the only thing i feel i need to say is,
dont put "finisher" in your verse unless you got some reeeeal dope lines comin up. you wasted my time iwth that finisher none of it hit hard at all.

tru liez: punches there, some original some not so original.. i used a fishin line before but not bad.. overall you had enough to take this kid.

oh and check, liez aint new to rb. just a new name...
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Old 04-09-03, 02:12 AM   #10
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Mic Chek
--- Best Lines ---

Mark an X on true liez cause that’s the destination for the bombsite…/
Skills ignite, as in battles ur surely dropping like panties on prom night…/
You cant calm fright, I swing with punches that you cant compete with…/
Have your face hit the concrete quick, you winning? Complete myth…/

...These were the only lines I could see as being any good really ... Some of that shit's played out, but whatever ... Your multis was aight ... punches weren't up to par, most of them just fell off at the end of the bars ... Good Flow ...

Tru LieZ
--- Best Lines ---

Check it even if ur soul was nike u would still lose/
I create flows clowing this child like a carnival cruise/
Dicks like you aint even worth beatin cuz ur so wack/
U sodamn insane i got u hidin in bushs from my attack/

What happened in your last bar ... You forget a line or something? ... Anyway ... Nice Flow ... Harder Punches ... All Around Better Verse ... Original Punches took this Battle ...

VOTE = Tru LieZ
 
Old 04-09-03, 07:57 AM   #11
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mic checks best line;

like the way a pig flys, you beating me is true liez

ermm seriously i had a hard time finding one no disrespect
ur flow was good and decent structure but not much original shit in there or word play

Tru liez best line;

Nigga aint seein my bars as if he was a blind convict
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As charlotte u couldnt put a intrestin twist on the web/

some good word play decent flow and over all better verse which had some punches

vote=tru liez
 
Old 04-09-03, 08:05 AM   #12
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what the fuck is this shit !...his was wack as fuck !!!!....whos dick you suckin !!!!
 
Old 04-09-03, 08:08 AM   #13
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rapbattles.com=dicksuckin.com, cant have a fair battle ever.

-always someone voting for themselves.
-always a complainer (true liez)
-dick riding like crazy
-RBBL aint gonna pay any attention to this bullshit.
 
Old 04-09-03, 08:09 AM   #14
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next week match me with someone respectibul *note to mods*
 
Old 04-09-03, 08:15 AM   #15
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NOTE to MIC CHECK.... STOP FUCKING FREEPOSTING

and My Vote Goes To Tru Lies..... Just because he didnt have as many played lines as Mic Check did

Vote Tru Lies
 
 


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