yo yo i take the mic...deliver my spit..coz ur rhymes well written but dont mean shit
my rhymes got u trippin..u fallin down my never ending pit
no ones sicker than me..or slicker than me
lock u in a cell and force feed ya the key
so listen to me..coz i know u addicted to my sound
u impressed by my style...in a battle im like a boxer ..knocking u out in first round
coz if ya wanna battle..ur gonna get beat like a bitch
run u ova..in my rova and leave ur ass in a ditch
where is the catch? shit i dont even know
ur like a bitch with no tongue u cant suck so u blow
this flow is just a wake up call a segment of my rhymin pattern
ur like the planet.. im running rings around u like u was saturn
the number one rapper...im a menace like dennis
u cant even see me..coz ur heads too far up your own anus


im just free'ing

what yall think

im new at this

yo i liked this short indeed but kept the same level of intensity through the whole spit holla at me for a collab

aight then lets do a colab

im new to this site so direct me around for when we gonna get our collab spitted

go to main page of forums on the bottom you can pm messages just send me a note and we can get this done today if you want

chek ya pm then

uppin fo' mo replies

yo, wanna battle? i dont got audio yet but text is ight wit me...hit me up

yeh man ..if u set it up and spit first and tell me where to spit ill battle u fo sho'

holla

uppin

any more feedback?

i was kinda feelin it but it was too simple...not disrespect dunny bu ti guess i'm into complex rhymin...work on your wordplay...you had some good punches...work on your metas a little but besides that keep spittin...one

peep some of the shit i have dropped