whiz iz in

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check in

..::Warm Up::..
Wack Rappers Take Wack-Names So I'll Bash-ya-Face With Dental-plates till tha Plaque-brakes
I'll Take Your Style And Substract Tha Sic Then Add E's (at 'eaze) 2 Leave your Groupies left With One Fan-Base *
..::Playin With Words Part I :Personal Punchlines::..
'Da Lyrical Whiz' Tryin 2 Have '1/4th' of-My-Skill, Suckin d!ck like a DeMONIC Alien Reachin For my '200-Dollar-Bill' (ooooooooh)
U Tryin 2 b a 'Funny Head' But U Givin 'SKull-too-a-Joker', Lemme Blow up Your brain Simular Like tha Long-of-a-Smoker **
..::Playin With Words Part II : Quick Punchlines::..
Ima fill your 'brain' with 'Electrik Shoxx' too leave u 'Mentally-Dis-Charged' (discharged)
Realise u cud only b 'big' if 'Wayne Szalinski' stepped out tha screen n u got 'Accidently-enlarged' ***
..::Multie Power::..
My Intelect Rips-your-text dis-connects tha Disks-of-vets 2 Leave Your Sholders Cold When I Twist-ya-neck
Dis-Respect My Vicious-sets and I'll Cripple-Fast Spittin-Vexed With Tripple-Threads of My Sickend-hands ,Stitch-ya-Cents so u cud Swim-in-vents where tha Fishes-went
..::Finish Up With A MetaPhorical Thorment::..
I reverse 'Osmoses' with flows of 'Osteoporosis' that'll 'Split your Bones' Faster then tha 'work-of-mozes'
punch with 'Illness' that hurts your Illest Words worst then first-'tuberculosis'
My 'Affective-thorment' makes your 'body parts' run across Deserts like a lepra-nomad
U'd Betta Check-tha-gourmet cuz I'm Burnin cheesy Lines 'Circlin around ya style' with Plaques-off-'orbits'
Fùck-Today This Weak Kid Needs 2 Elevate in a 'Shockin'-Way But he cudn't even Pick up Heavy Lines If he had an 'Electrik'-Fork-Lift

this shit iz like a job, how i punch in On Thiz Bitch
I hit With Money Shots while dawg spit constant non-cents
im law enforcement mixed with a Consistent arsonist,
Burn U wITH bARZ often, til u feel like a convicted convict
uplift ya spirit slice ya brain in two, so when u think
u'll alwayz have a split-decision,
My Verbal Iz Like Hazardous Stormz, alwayz givin u harsh-conditionz
Plus U a Coward, u don't got the heart contend wit it
Dawg u lil pup, no way u lead against me,
like a midget on a treadmill, u having a short run in this league!
Yo This Mad Funny, Becuz ya name should be 5timesKnockedout
0-5 record dunny , like a throwback fubu jersey



Imma Prevail Crush U Cuz U frail, even worst imma send u a present
a broken mirror in the mail, so u can get the gift and the curse
u a postman in a wheelchair, alwayz pushing the envenlope 1st
then got the nerve to step to whiz, cripple this kid, like senior
citizens losing the feeling n dey legz,
ya finisherz iz wack, u alwayz got loose endz, pop ya group n friends
only how yall get props is settin up drama productionz

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My 'Affective-thorment' makes your 'body parts' run across Deserts like a lepra-nomad

reverse 'Osmoses' with flows of 'Osteoporosis' that'll 'Split your Bones' Faster then tha 'work-of-mozes'

Nice.....

like a midget on a treadmill, u having a short run in this league!

Yo This Mad Funny, Becuz ya name should be 5timesKnockedout

Nice.....

this shit iz like a job, how i punch in On Thiz Bitch
I hit With Money Shots while dawg spit constant non-cents
im law enforcement mixed with a Consistent arsonist,
Burn U wITH bARZ often, til u feel like a convicted convict
uplift ya spirit slice ya brain in two, so when u think
u'll alwayz have a split-decision,
My Verbal Iz Like Hazardous Stormz, alwayz givin u harsh-conditionz

Liked the Opener.....

The Other cat I Wasnt feelin... Not Really Many Punch-lines

My Vote da lyrical Whiz...... More and Better Punchlines...

i aint even need to quote on this battle cuz dalryicalwhiz took it by default and bars

5hitknockout needs to learn that u cant use ( " ") in the RBBL and then he might win he had a decent verse but shyt was off balanced by the " " and because lyricalwhiz had metaz wit punches that was directer

votes needed

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like a midget on a treadmill, u having a short run in this league!

played!!!


uplift ya spirit slice ya brain in two, so when u think
u'll alwayz have a split-decision,


played!!!!

hit With Money Shots while dawg spit constant non-cents


played!!!1

dawg ya verse was real stupid and that gives me the impression that u saw these at another site and you bit from somebody or u recycled man. The only thing u had was wordplay. Knockout ur shit was also stupid. U didnt have any wordplay and the multis was killin so mayb itwont that stupid but it was way better than lyrical.

vote=5hitknockout

wtf? lol mann, ok if u say so

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Umm..Lets see..Ima agree with CI^^..Ima vote for..5HitKnockOut..for the simple fact..DLW..had too many played lines..nice meta 5

thanx man still uppin for some more votes

2-2 still uppin

dalyricalwhiz took this with better punchez. he came harder overall.

vote- dalyricalwhiz

p.s. 5hit should be DQ'd for breaking tha rulez