Discrimination is against the law/ we must all be jailed/ different flags different feelings/ yet everyone is appealing/ trying to determine how many lives are worth stealing/ Brown, white, purple, black, Isreali/ Camacho, McDouglas, Eisenhower or Baily are one in the same/ cuz preference is the name of the game and the game has no rules its how good you aim/ deevolution is the only thing to blame/ when your son goes out and comes home with a guy or your daughter says she hates living and only wants to die/ why your parents never talk and tell you everytime a different lie/ why America is now eating stale apple pie
Terror at the the Twin Towers made the world spin crazily for hours over stupidity uneeded like dead flowers/ could be a sign from the man with supreme powers/ let us not forget we all lost somethin of ours.......

son i liked this alot your mind is very aware and you display and ability to troject then project through context a person can see with just words i think this was hot as hell keep doing your thing

Good look my peeps......

nice spit flex,had the chuck d vibe going with it,i thought anyway,liked your subject and vocabs,was one of those thought provokin peices...propz

bismillah

u handled the topic nicely but i dunno if i just diddnt get it but i thought all ya bars were well to long and so they threw the flow off a bit. ya vocab was aight tho and like i said ya topic was nice. sorta sounded like spearhead to me. anyway cuz return the favour and check mine
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aight 1

Feelin that HOT shit, keep Rhymin tight
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Flex, what's going on man...
I feel this... you cover alot of issues goin' on, that all can relate to... but you don't really go into depth with them... the verse is abit to short in my opinion... I was feeling the flow, though it was a bit off at some points... rhymes and wordplay was aight...
Good piece dawg... -1-

NO doubt I get a side tracked at times but I feel whut U mean...I'm workin on a longer piece as we speak.....Good lookin out peeps

hot as hell man you ripped this shit apart well done blud

The Productions Word Life

U know my nizzle......The Productions

You need to use more wordplay... the format the flow was in was hard to keep track of. Otherwise, joint was aight.

I liked it.. the flow was a bit hard to follow ^.. but I still got tha hang of it.. you had some good points in there, well thought out piece.. uppin'

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dope

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