aiight im sorry yall,i had to vent,my bad,ive been seeing this little faggot lil cashflow for a coupl eof days and hes just go tto the point that he annoys me totally and it wont leave my headspace until i say something,so i quickly wrote this,in an attempt to suppress my rage....i hope you actually read this bitch,not just open the post see the length and get scared and write a one word response like ,ohh your whack,fucking pussy.apologies for the language also,see what shes done to me...if you saw his posts youd know what i mean,arogant son of a bitch....



welcome to my satire...............
cha ching cha ching,who that coming yo//
oh no its the schoolyard bully son run its lil cashflow//
hurry up everyone hide!,grab the preschoolers first though//
'what the fuck for?',i dont want that thug using them as hos//
ok thats shits over..........my bad.....

(ok ok ok my bad im sorry, i had to make fun my bad,just the whole in school thing made me laugh)

i can just picture you,yes thats right you,lil cashflow,sitting in your trailer park//
watching eight mile in the dark,memorizing all the battles,grounds for you to start//
oh you poor so you bark,lil cashflow,or is that just the image? of a wannabe gangsta//
schoolyard pranksta,lining your 'boys' up on the sandlot line of skrimage,just prayin noone takes ya//
lil cashflow seriously (come on its ok you can tell me)is your name a joke?//(it has to be)
cha ching cha chang,watch out now,he wants to be down,but secretly hes broke//(fakin aint easy)
i think you need a name change my mang,at present it dont make sense(cents)//
with a alias like lil cashflow,its a wonder you even have friends,i thikn you just pretend//
you claiming you throw punches,you fag,you still carry plastic wrap bag lunches,you hit like a tedddy bear//
even if you did land one,id just laugh at it,tickled by your tacky flea ridden nappy ass fur hair//
i dread the day you actually obtain a razorblade,youll go round the class room braggin//
'hey look guys i just had my first shave',youre that pathetic,ever lookin at your spit...i regret it//
ive been imprinted with this image,of totally whackness,with a writer that doesnt even get it//
your a pretty boy,just coz you a kid wont make me show you pitty,straight up in dont like you or your style,its shitty//(void)
you feel me?you wont go international,straight up you wont even leave your current situation//
you facing a life of your heart racing,everytime your moms naked chasing youround the kitchen in an attempt//
to start spreadin the redneck population,ima ego deflator,your a bug,eat verbal slugs,im exterminator//
ill break your fucking epidermis with purpose...you fucking insect,i dont even have to aim,its pointless,i shoot sporadicly//
a vocabulary with words with more then 2 sylables is needed to even slightly grab my attention see//
im way to big for you,jugganaught,ill stomp yo ass easily,need it be said, that id rather have you dead//
then you breathing freely,fillin ya head,talking shit like 'im an emcee,please dont laugh at me'...//
honestly tell me,who fed you that bullshit to start off with kid?//
your obviously wearing shoes that are fifteen clown sizes to big...like circus tents,i hope you take offence,coz what you say next//
is the last of your existence,ima presence...you just a shade,braggin that your rhymes are sharper then a fuckin razablade?//
my case is made,my case is laid,the juries decision made,your a whack bitch,that needs to quickly fade//
my microphones explodes like grenades,even my subliminal messages will leave you flayed,about face,post haste//
retreat to a easily defendable place and come hit me up when you think you about level to my grade//
dont hate...just coz ive embarresed your name to the point you wear a paper bag on your face,doesnt mean//
you cant go live on in a dumpster some place nahmean?//
home sweet home,youll grow old,and die knowing i made you cry//
why?i gave you the option to commit suicide,instead of being attakced by my skinnin knives,dipped in syanide//
(you said no)
i left you paralized,i even gave your bitch ass time to familurize//
your self with the wheelchair,your 'fly' new ride,but you stayed resitant//
but im persistant,as the knife opened you painfully from the inside,i see it in your eyes,your trying to synergize//
but beleive me ill be there when you reach your apex,drape you in latex,lube you up,send you straight up,your mothers thighs//

....bitch,you belong in there,you need to grow up a little,shit.

i think thats fair,fucking teddy bear bitch...wannabe faggot,you give rappers a bad name

(and the doctor said)
your a fucking disease,thats now plaugin emcees for centuries,like influenza entities//
cept you leech,and take away the life force,to the point where noone likes rap no more//
the strong survive this condition for sure,with an antidote in the shape of metaphor//(the worlds a stage)
and straight up incinerate you in a blaze of ill characture,but i cant be too hard//
with a name like lil cashflow...you must be poor...
when i drop from my planet,i shatter the floor the core cant handle,astound you,lighting metamorphs swords around you//
with the strength of the all mighty in my palm,extend my arm,cause you one hundred percent burns,(ahh),grevious bodily harm//
bismillah...
oh did i forget i do burners??...my bad...

masallamah

lmao... well um here's a suggestion You dont have to explain and tell a little story of why you post something.. just post and let them figure out why you did lol. And again this sure is another long keystyle lol.... dont call these things short.. lol.. OoNnEe

this is what i do,i write and write and write and write until i cant no more,and i need another inspiration...this is my keystyle,10-15 minutes max written...

damn, I laughed at this one. It was nice, but like it was said before, this wasn't short. Still liked the drop though.


Focus

oh please don't mistake me for a newbie i used to be on this site every day until i joined the army but that's not the point this is you wrote way to fuckin much for i mean damn we understood that you don't like this cat but why so much on the motha fuckin diss i really don't think you had to put down so much but fuck it you had me from the start and almost to the end i couldn't finish the shit too long for my taste there isn't too much crit i give can give you except if you shortin the lines so the flow of the spit is better understood or maybe you just spit fast i don't now, you could also throw in some multies to spice it up a little, but other than that this shit was hot

odd gives it
5 of 5 mics

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even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

aww, Atetrack, you gave em tha burns...people who think it's too long don't like reading rhymes...But Ate...try to keep it clean...we got an image to uphold...Nawmeeen...I give it 4 out of five...I take one point for vulgarity...nice spit though...

Wayyyyyyyyyyy too long man, seriously, thats like way longer than most songs, make it alot shorter and sweeter than that, half of it didn't really rhyme or flow so improve on that man, shorten or re-word yo lines to get it to flow better...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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that was a long battle and funny as hell...i was feelin it from the intro all the way till the end...wonder what kinda come back will the other kat come up with...and as far as it beeing too long, sit man drop whatevers on your mind no matter how long...nice piece...one

thanks for the love yall,the shits so long coz id spit that in under a minute an a half most days,even if the flows off,that smy style,rhymes aint to big on me,as long as i get my point across...hahaha odly you sound like your feelin sorry for the cat haha,thanks for the feedback,my bad on the vulgarity,but you know,sometimes i looose myself on it...narc,the cat never replied,no showed me,punk bitch,got scared,or maybe he just got to bored of reading it and gave up...i dunno,but foreal you know,i spit long bars,long songs,some cats hate,some cats like it...its all good...
bismillah