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Old 04-11-03, 05:15 PM   #1
Enigmatic
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.Harmony.

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Got niggas mad at me, but gravity...//
Ain't strong enough to hold me down//
Mad cause he's not dethroned, but crowned//
My goals are proud and my robe is brown//
I rose through a method known as flow//
Been through horror thats not known to Poe//
A poem I wrote has never posed as a gloat//
But braggin' has to happen when I'm rappin//
Your skills are slackin' mine are happenin'//
Due to the skull where my mind is trapped in//
My rhymes attacking your minor passion//
Of trying to outshine without shine//
You have none, so how can you have more than I//
I'm immortalized as a millenial Mordecai//
With every war of rhymes, I'm more despised//
My birth on earth was the Lord's suprise//
To mankind a blessin' with every damn rhyme//
Oral eyes, I spit pictures that prophesize//
Through the author's eyes, then are authorized//
Organized, handed to choirs, then harmonized//
It's impossible to absorb my rhymes in normal time//

Different type flow for all y'all cats... what ya think?!
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Old 04-11-03, 06:46 PM   #2
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nice spit homie.U jus lettin ppl kno wut u about,thas coo.STay ^
-Avi
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Old 04-16-03, 09:06 AM   #3
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.Sleepin'.

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Why y'all sleepin' on a niggas post? I don't rock y'all's minds every damn rhyme? Man, y'all need to up a nigga more, makin' someone leave RB and shit.
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Old 04-16-03, 09:12 AM   #4
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this was aight. u got an aight flow and sum good vocab but u just not sayin much to me. ya rhyme scheme was quite good tho. dunno wat else to say just work on it a bit. RETURN THE FAVOUR CUZ AND CHECK MINE AND J6F's COLLAB IF I RULED THE WORLD aight 1
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