Wuttup world,dug this out my notebook..lemme kno wutchu think

Its AMAZIN...how tha killaz remain anonymous/
Murdaz is like hoes-f*ckin wit evry1 but iz nethang but monogamous/
Tha government aint keepin its promises/
Seein situations filled wit hostages/
Still see mah folks caught in political bondages/
Still see heads eatin str8 outta tha garbages/
Now these mofo's came up with tha crime shevels/
To dig up sum dirt on dis rhymin rebel/
Dis world's filled with demonic forces and grimey devils/
Would I be a MC if I rocked diamond bezels?/
Its kinda incredible how ppl's mind levels/
Can drop from 10 to 0 jus by me standin behind dis barrel/
I aint hea for tha cash or entertainment/
Im hea tryna make bout 20 statements/
Like why Arabs r considered uncivilzed cuz they strap xplosive packages to they girls/
We kill our own ppl,shoot up schools could WE be tha tru savages of the world?/
Life cherish it..Death beware of it/
Cuz u can waste a whole life and besides dyin,thas tha scariest*

lemme kno..Stay ^
-Avi

PHAT MAN!

yeah it was str8

uppin

hot shit...as always you came thru namsayin...i had to read it twice i liked it that much...one

thanx for tha feedback.thanx rekluse for uppin,haha.Stay ^
-Avi

good rhyme...but still it is kinda fucked up when people put bombs on women if thats not savage then i don wanna meet u in a dark alley haha. im jus playin, that shit was good

^^uppin

preety ill duke

Like why Arabs r considered uncivilzed cuz they strap xplosive packages to they girls/
We kill our own ppl,shoot up schools could WE be tha tru savages of the world?/
Life cherish it..Death beware of it/
Cuz u can waste a whole life and besides dyin,thas tha scariest*

tightest lines in the whole piece really tells it like it is. though i gotta admit suicide bombers are fucked up. anyway tight little verse ya vocab was tight but the rhyme scheme got on my nerves a bit but still complex and deep shit. anyway RETURN THE FAVOUR CUZ and check mine and Jonny 6 feets collab aight peace bro