YO, WHEN THIS NIGGA STEP ON THE MIC, MC DUCK AND DODGE/
I ONLY FUCK MODEL CHICKZ, I DON'T RESPECT SLUTS AND WHORES/
H-DOUBLE-O-D, SOUND LIKE FAB WHEN I SPIT/
I KEEP A 4-4, COCKED BUT I'M MAD WITH THE FIFTH/
WE WAY OUT OF YA LEAGUE I SPIT FLOWS THAT COULD STOP A BULL/
LIKE CANIBUS I URINATE ROCKET FUEL/
YALL CLOWN ASSES, I'M THE GENERAL YALL LOONEY TOONS/
NIGGAZ TALKIN' LIKE THEY GOT GUNS WELL THEN SHOOT ME DUDE/
METAPHORICALLY KNOWN ASS THE ILLEST RAPPER ALIVE/
I GOT SHELLS THE THAT DON'T BRUISE, THEY TEAR UP YA INSIDES/
ELITE MC'S LIKE JIGGA, FIFTY AND NAS/
COULD COMPETE WITH ME WHEN I SPIT THESE BARS/
I'M ONLY ON THE INTERNET CAUSE I CAN'T COP A DEAL/
NIGGAZ TALK TO MUCH SHIT TO HOODZ YALL NIGGAS AIN'T REAL/

FUCKIN' I'M TIRED AS SHIT I'LL BE BACK LATA!!

woah, that shit is whack...
you need some serious help on ur flow and VOCAB!!!!!
keep tryin thug