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Old 04-12-03, 10:59 AM   #1
RythmicTendicies
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YO, here comes the illist and silliets rapper on the planet/
He don't put up with any capour, he just ahs a go at it/
Feds watching him for every crim hes about to recommit/
he spits it, rips and nips it - psycological test getting him readmitted/
For he is the greatest player and satantic satanist in the world/
For thats aboutt he size of it, people sayign hes unimpressive/
For it's his impressive and excessive intake of antitoxine/
that has his adrenaline pumping - like this left ventricle it's thumping/
hes essentirc, electrifying then something something/
run out of things ot submit - must like his satanist past/
he cannot be readmitted to heaven he did'nt have 2 chances/
he has 7, fucked up everyone he was given, so he can't be forgiven/
as he keeps on sinning and hes unsure about his recessive cure/
as he cannot be sure about his future, he finds himself obsessive/
and cannot get out of the mess hes in, he fucked up his next of kin/
it only straigtens out when hes on tour, like the al queda/
you cannot be sure when he'll strike next, obsessed with the no.6/
Hes the RT, the ET of this rap world, the exterresterial of this game/
His rythmic style is obscure, dos'nt give a fuck what your style is/
cos to him it's just another long streak of shit and piss/
cos it's mostly likely a david to his golaith conclusion thats his/
but his finale is'nt somethign you'llw ant to miss/
not one of you unfil cocksuckers will want to diss/
cos hes suddenly has these immediate tendesices to spit/
hes RT, the ET, new hard nut on the block/
hard as a 70 yeard old, vigara addicts erection/
Diss tracks to mya got his sould running cold/
Now it's time for this Rythimc master to fold/

first time posting on here, it gets kinda choppy towards the end
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Old 04-12-03, 11:30 AM   #2
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yea i didnt really like this...ur right bout the endin....had a nice flow...but nuttin really special.....keep it up PZ
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Old 04-12-03, 11:35 AM   #3
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aiyyo i wasnt feelin this at all....i got half way and my brain started hurtin and shit...if there was a ahhhh what you call it reason behind this rhyme i didnt catch it at all...no disrespect but work on your shit dunny...one
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Old 04-12-03, 12:56 PM   #4
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thanks for you input..
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Old 04-12-03, 01:31 PM   #5
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i thought it was st8
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