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04-16-03, 07:41 AM | #1 | ||
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Callin All MC's
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(This is to any) wack individual, thats lackin the lyrical talent or physical
stamina to stand in my visual/ its a hazordous ritual/ reenactment of difficult random syllable patterns that i have mastered at intervals/ spittin faster than rivers flow, cuz this land isnt livable/ im trapped on this miserable planet with bastards and imbeciles/ no one's average or typical/ their all rappers or criminals/ with albums, a million sold, fans attached to their genitals/ and half of the women chose, to be dancers and centerfolds/ breast cant fit into their clothes, (cuz) they enhanced em with sillicone/ my standards and principles, are outcasted in general/ cuz i'd die rather than listen to, tracks by mack 10 or mystical/ now its back to original/ where each rap is subliminal/ unmatched classic material/ every man is a critic so... / with a hand full pencils (no), with a can full of michelob/ i trample this little globe causin considerable damage and bend the axis its tilted on/ just imagine the end result/ as the planet collapses under the massive passages in my skull/ i was a bad adolescent with a huge chip on his shoulder/ and as i get a bit older... i get a little bit bolder/ now im a venomous cobra/ spittin with infinite lyrics written in folders/ sick and demented when given a motive/ now add a pen and its over/ you kids not livin a culture/ this business is riddin with jokers into gimmicks, and posers..... |
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04-16-03, 08:06 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
nice drop homie...feelin it
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04-16-03, 09:08 AM | #3 | |
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.Hot Joint.
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The wordplay on this joint is hot kid. You got it on lock so far. You need to spread out your lines, and make it easier to read... otherwise, everything's on point.
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04-16-03, 10:14 AM | #4 | ||
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nah, dawg that was sick... forget about spacing the bars out, I followed it fine.. it does help sometimes tho. you had some nice vocab and the flow was spot.. yo, uppin' this joint..
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04-16-03, 11:36 AM | #5 | ||
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Uppin
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04-16-03, 07:06 PM | #6 | ||
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Feedback PLZ
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04-16-03, 07:24 PM | #7 | |
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ai yo i gotta admit i thought u wernt much(even though u beat me)but i gotta admit dawg this piece was tighter than a virgins pussy,respect
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04-17-03, 03:29 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
Cheers much appreciated
Peep this |
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04-17-03, 03:34 PM | #9 | |
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You have a good style.. try an seperate your lines though. It makes it easier to read. OoNnEe Nice piece..
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04-17-03, 03:34 PM | #10 | ||
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IP:
yo this was a very nice drop. excellent wordplay and had some good multis. flow was good and a very nice topic. i liked this a lot. keep spittin man...
also, could you peep my shit?http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39624 |
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04-18-03, 05:13 AM | #11 | |
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lets battle t pound
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