14-20 lines

you know the rules!!!

you go first....

14-20 lines.. that's kinda an awkward number isn't it.. ah well.. gimme a few minutes...

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opedogg, why's ya mouth still open dawg.//
better close it or before you know it my dick'll be down your throat and you'll be choaking on.//
what you smokin' on?.. by the look of ya bars ya methed out and dosed on some opium.//
ya whole rhyme like a delerious fantacy, all like "I'm gonna win".. no ya not.//
actually, as much as I hate to burst your bubble.//
unless you come with somethin' hard, you in serious trouble.//
I reduce entire structures to rubble like they was nuthin' but ant hills.//
you think words can't kill, you're right, they just bring ya to the brink of suicide.//
your clueless rhymes have no place in tha front lines.//
hey this is to all MODS, start a new forum called tha sewer and move this loosers verse inside.//
dawg, I'm the first to drop and you the first to dive.//
I got esp.. the outcome of this fight is in favour of me.//
I can see it now.. 3-0 for the final count, I believe that's a KO.//
okay yo... I'm out.// peace 1

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Blunt
Really liked that rhyme. Flowed well, Good cutups and good flow.