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04-17-03, 04:29 AM | #1 | |
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i was bored so i keyed dis in a few minutes.....
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i got to be da hottest thing livin u heard me right/
i spit flames in da form of liquid it burn all night/ yall learn i write my rhymes make yall turn in fright/ yall lines cant reach so yall herbs cant fight/ my verbs dey bite like menus get u served all nite/ and last words from wat i heard was dude his words is tight/ im actually posed to swerve so yall dogs can hike/ yall pussies i see yall thongs so please gurls dont gripe/ my pearls u like my wisdom be conformed from light/ and my thoughts be inscribed in temples for all sorts of types/ i spit for da thugs and gangstas wat yall thought i might/ im from da street so i bust all yall dodge da site/ call me lucky i never got popped but i lodge da pipe/ right in yo mouth watch da spark and yo heart ignite/ its hard to see yo sight regard dat my flaws is slight/ and yall brauds dey givin me da draws tonite/ muthafucka................. |
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04-17-03, 06:51 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
damn uppin
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04-17-03, 07:26 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
you said ya'll to much.. I couldn't really feel a flow to it.. and work on vocab.. OoNnEe
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04-17-03, 11:50 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
people have they own style...and vocab aint everything^^just statin my opinion...nice piece cuz..i can tell this is made for a audio..
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