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Old 04-17-03, 06:59 PM   #1
strictlysdplaya
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falling for you

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im kinda falling for you, kinda just a crush.
but at least you got me in a since of pure blush.
wishin for jus a small kiss, or at least a touch
but maybe im jus askin for a lil too much.
just to be a friend, mabie tell the end.
im willin to wait for your heart to mend.
im wishing apon this last star,
im praying to god(even tho i hate him)
im praying to the heavens, so mabie one day you could call me your angle. and mabie i could call you mine.
im wishing for that day when my prayers come true.
and im standing there "kissing you"
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Old 04-17-03, 08:57 PM   #2
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umm ok u need to just elevate just a lil bit more but other then that it was aight but it coulda just had a few more details
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