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Old 04-18-03, 01:16 AM   #1
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W3 Flex Havanah vs Criminal Intent

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Flex Havanah (1-0)
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Criminal Intent(1-0)

Match up: Friday
Check in by: Sunday
Verses by: Tuesday

20 line max.
no hate/dick ryder votes.
no senseless beef.

Good luck.
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Old 04-18-03, 03:21 AM   #2
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checkin in
 
Old 04-19-03, 01:14 AM   #3
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everybody pull up and grab a seat witness havanahs brutal defeat//
playin hot potato is the only way that u foolin with heat//
u loosin ya teeth fuckin with me i put ya dick in the mud//
or i could get nasty and write rhymes in ya blood//
they say u can kill 2 birds with 1 stone well im killin this bird//
u think i was a pothead the way im smokin te herb//
this nigga beat his meat all the time//
this muthaphucka is wack i print ya post out and break weed on ya rhyme//
my dick'll pee on ya mind//
this nigga cant fuckin concentrate cuz he got me on the mind//
this nigga will get his ass whooped this hour//
im uprootin this muthafucka then stompin this flower//
im the one and only and crimnal intent givin u law and order when im spittin//
u'd think i had diarrhea the way i be shittin//

get up
 
Old 04-21-03, 08:18 AM   #4
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Old 04-21-03, 08:25 AM   #5
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I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary//
You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully//
Theres a method to my madness but I haven't figured it yet//
Your minds in the clouds like a 7 foot russian space cadet//
I'll terminate you like your Internet provider//
with more deadly intent than those kids from Colorado//
Hit You with a table and chair call me the chairman of the boards//
I'll leave you strung out on rap like I was spittin guitar chords//
Don't care whut your name means and its only fair//
Cuz in my win column there'll just be a number there//
Please don't get defensive and bad mouth me//
cuz this aint JerrY Springer, Steve can't help you B//
I'm comparing you to a game on my Atari system//
so I can say you played out before anybody listened//
I'm like a cheat sheet I come correct//
My words are hot even when I'm doin a mic check//
Bring you back to '92 kid Protect yo neck//
 
Old 04-22-03, 12:05 AM   #6
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votes are now needed. Pretty nice drop flex. I didnt think you'd show u
 
Old 04-22-03, 02:33 AM   #7
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m,y break down

"everybody pull up and grab a seat witness havanahs brutal defeat//
playin hot potato is the only way that u foolin with heat//
u loosin ya teeth fuckin with me i put ya dick in the mud//
or i could get nasty and write rhymes in ya blood//"

^^^ Criminal Intent Only Shit I Felt From U Fama

"I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary//
You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully//"

^^^ havanah only descent line from u

Vote - Criminal Intent came better with punches harder hittin n shit


my 2 cents
 
Old 04-22-03, 01:11 PM   #8
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0-1 uppin
 
Old 04-22-03, 02:03 PM   #9
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vote>flex

he was just better in every way
too much non punchng lines on both sides tho
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Old 04-22-03, 02:56 PM   #10
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Aight lets see....My vote goes to Intend

Because he had more overall flow and punches
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Old 04-22-03, 03:05 PM   #11
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my vote goes to flex... His punches were more thought out and I found intent used alot of elementary lines for example this one

"u think i was a pothead the way im smokin te herb//" <--- that's something you'd see in a frontline newbie battle..

I liked the flow flex had bumpin' in his joint more aswell... peace
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Old 04-22-03, 09:13 PM   #12
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2-2 I WASNT XPECTIN THIS STILL UPPIN
 
Old 04-23-03, 09:00 AM   #13
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uppin
 
Old 04-24-03, 09:25 PM   #14
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2-2. uppin for votes.
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Old 04-24-03, 09:45 PM   #15
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Criminal intent had too many fillers, generic rhymes, almost nothing personal at all... and changing the color of that line was straight up corny

for me flex killed him with his first two lines:

I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary//
You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully//

that was the only really hot shit in this battle, but overall i'd go with flex
 
 


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