This joint is about that war in Iraq. Don't get a nigga wrong, i'm glad we bombed them bitch asses, but certain shit about it is wrong... peep this.

Now who's really down for murder and war//
Burners and swords, many lives turnin' up lost//
Many nights of flying bullets, fleeing soldiers//
Kids get hit, mothers too, we live this shit//
Getting older, the men who ride the frontline//
Die first... promised to rise when sun shines//
Fine dirt awaits the arrival of my hearse//
Diverse creations erased from the Bible, cursing Satan//
They replace 'em with nonsense, saying bomb threats...//
Aren't to spite the beast, but for foreign conquest//
Despite belief of timeless war, fuckin' police//
Train harder, simple minded cats catch brain trauma//
And that's that government plan that had us niggas...//
Running from vans with bagged crack stuck in they pants//
Designed to be scared of Arabs, fear they bad rap//
We built half the nation, now we want half back//
Peep the bigger picture nigga, fuck satan's reperation//
Study knowledge of self, fight the people's deprevation//
Of knowledge that's held in jail cells where bail ain't about a check//
These cats think they're holdin' all us niggas back//

one of the illest taps into realistic life i have ever seen

Good lookin' out kid. Keep uppin' this joint y'all... makes a nigga feel good when his peers give him good feedback, feel me?

I liked it... it had some truth in it which made it what it is. OoNnEe.. nice work.

i read the intro.. and stopped
you're lame as hell dawg

give it up, put the mic down, stop scribblin with the pencil
it's over

DAMN...............Nice piece enig.....deffinitly......


peep mine

~my Thoughts As A Man~

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the rhyme had a solid connection with current affairs. good job tapping the relevence. i lost the flow and rhyme scheme in a couple of the lines but overall a fine spit.

this was a nice spit, but I got lost more than once. You had me with the war bit at the beginnin, and when you related it to street shit...but then I was like...WHAT? anyway, maybe it was just too deep for me. I'll read it a few more times.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis