Who's on deck?The Top Prospect Comin' straight off the dome piece,as my fingers run across these keyboard keys, get ready to peep the steez, I bring all MC's to they knees, committin' lyrically sodomy,the Gods are all proud of me,because my lyrics travel faster than a light year, my lyrical war is nuclear,puncturing your brain through your ear, like Omar Epps in the sequel to Scream,it seems whack mc's die quicker than black people in horror movies, do you really think your words are gonna move me,I hold my own like black protesters in the civil revolution, my resolution is your evolution has gone from men to boyz, thinkin' you makin' some noise,til you find your life is faker than Buzz light year on Toys, mad men stress their abdomen, but they six pack only gives me a bullseye for my freestyle rap,perhaps my sonar rap will reach these hardheads, and scare some sense into 'em like Russia and nuclear warheads,so use caution when I'm slicin' mc's in portions,performing lyrical abortions before more weak lines! are givin' birth, and eventually grow into the worst verse,but prematurely I put 'em in a hearse

Awesome vocab, the flow is real good in most part, some are a little off...but joe u got some skill, i didnt know u could rap...keep spittin

this peice was alrght......flow was hard to catch the way you structured the piece but its got potential........
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Word: Keep it up, and try a different structure

It was alright. I see talent screaming to come out... keep elevating OoNnEe

Too much rhyming and not enough depth there, If you are new to rappin then you get some props but space out your rhymes and bring something else to the table except telling us about yourself and binding rhymes time after time...it gets annoying.
But props none the less.