Me, myself And I will acheive shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/
till you become the filthy beast within you/
pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/
two decades deep, rememberances of my entrance into this endless sentence/
my clock ticks at the pace i walk with, slowly stagnated, half sacred, lock smith/
master of my own akward processed concious/
These heathens pass me by,with their glassy eyes/
masses drafting lies with massive ties to their graphic reliance science defied I/
left divided, a hybrid eyelid blink my liveable pious tries/
with fires beside this tired wire bone skeletal expired sellable buyer of hell/
full of medical swell my heretical spell disembowellement of edible realms/
i eat my flesh and return as the same/
entity tempted and tainted by empty centuries/
painted the stench of me destroys this polluted void that entered me/
since i was loin juice..if i fill myself with thoughts/
will it reach the top, explode and speak to God/
letting go of my peace, the fraud i teach/
father me out this martyred beast i call/
me, myself and I acheiving shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/
till you become the filthy beast within you/
pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/
I'm still giving more, and living slow/
will time passes me by like my grasp of life drastically/
i guess it has to be mine, and yours/
skin pores leaking my sins for people ive been before....

Nope Not For Me..

Dope Shit Bro, I Really Got Into That..

**Reads Again**

thanks N...your shit is complex and i like readin complex verbals...problem is not too many kats in here do though...its all gravy though...good looking out...wahid

check your pms dunny

uppin

Whoa I Liked This Piece Alot.... I Like The Way The First Part Is Repeated Again Towards The End.... That Shit Was Ill, Seriously..... Do Ya Do Audios?!?



Keep It Up Man

dope!!!!whoo - complex.. Nice 2 see sum1s writing shit that means sumtin u no wat im saying - deep . great pik of words. That had me intrested ....

This was ILL...Realy feelin this right here...

thanks for the replys...and to answer your question methane yes i do audios as well...good looking out...wahid

uppin

shit was ill narc,loved the ending starting htis,shit was deep as the abyss,totally my style nahmean,definite put this on a mic...nice nice nice....
bismillah

Shukran dunny...good looking out...wahid

real good use of vocab man, really showed off ur skill and knowledge
one thing i gotta say is i couldnt really get into it, i understood it all none of the words were over my head or nething like that but i just wasnt feelin what u were tryin to put out,
neway it was still a good piece that showed a lot of talent
return the favor and hit up my post

That had less vocab than I'm used to from you.. but it was still pretty good. OoNnEe

good shit was a lil too complex for me, not the ryhmes the meening, goos shit 0ne


everyone puts sum weird languange for close so

hola como estas

thanks for the replys...that post was about greed...guess i shoulda gotten more complex lol...good looking out...wahid