you dumb mother fucker youre in my house
thinkin your in charge of her skirt and blouse
im gonna fuckin beat you till your blood runs purple
till its soaked in the carpet
break your fuckin nose crush your fuckin skull
you wont remember the name of your violator
stab your fuckin brains with a spoon as dull
as your fuckin soul and your fuckin life
grab your fuckin ankles and twist em apart
rip the from your shins and jab them through your heart
youll wish you could think of a day when there was no pain
as i stain the walls with a new red paint
a homicidal maniac a sick fucking mind
rip open your gut and burn your insides
with a solitary match till it burns till its end
add some fuckin charcoal and start the process again
insert a needle in your lungs and give droplets of water
wath you slowly drowned as your breathing gets harder
you stupid mother fucker you shouldve never came
now your fuckin dead and your to fuckin blame

seems like a venting piece to me...

er...

....raw for sure, but maybe a bit too elaborate, but to me 'it is what it is'...

end of..

..resp...

I once tried writing a few peices with super duper violence, but I could never seem to be creative enough.

Props for being able to pull it off.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.