Like strychnine my rhyme enters your mind intertwinewith your spine with the cry for worldwide genocide as I the terrify/
Is on a suicide run from the Southern Cali slums to the ruins and crumbs of Jerusalem with the upcoming destruction of Mecca/
Universally gods of all or any contenda’s come to us being the dirtiest of pretenda’s none never being so clever what so ever/
Crime investor turned rhyme selector flow perfector turned soul collector the endeavor of my voice is measured threw tremors/
A rugged drunken cutthroat on a buck note faking pleasure of taking treasure eating so many styles like Hannibal Lector/
Line after line I define rhymes that’ll terrify the mind at the same time make bitch emcees flee and hide for a cheap sublime/
As I a traitor of lie in defy dare to reply spew cyanide on all of mankind watching mankind decline to a flat line 4 its last time/
fuck this world without a fair fight I’m running out of my corner with a knife in the middle of despite and with little of might/
As I’m not at all trying to be polite with an open invite I gladly spit sum depressing shit that would make you take your own life/
Like we all are going to die so why the fuck even try, as what we do in life is kind of meaningless kept for right now its killing time?

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the one that watches the watchmen:

This was fairly powerful...

...well of course, the rhyme scene was most apparent in this piece...and even though i felt at times it disrupted the 'flow' and 'meaning' of this piece, and less so the power of it...it still cam through well in the end to depict your thoughts and to an extent, who you are, in a surreal way...

..resp..

Amazing. Great use of vocab, excellent flow, amazing rhyme scheme and everything. This piece was pretty great. Stay up.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

JOEY!!!!! *clutches onto your shirt*......it's changed so much here..
where did everyone go?????

anywayz...great piece...flow was well n truely the highlight..
I got a little lost in the middle of all this..but ya know...
I got back on track again....and I'm impressed overall

stay up

~Soul~