Ill ish
Label me a pagan because I put no faith into a god, its dark prophet/
I will put the peadomorphosis in every living being so don't plan to stop~it/
Proteus the water god was a myth who could change his shape when he was willing/
Like him I will shape and mold ya thoughts through this ill vocabulary spilling/
Tetrahydrocannabinol intoxicates humans, but what effect does it have on this heathen/
My pulses are un-even, wondering if its tha demon that keeps me breathin/
Symbology can’t interpret these hieroglyphics, my terminology is terrific/
Its crazy how I don't cuss but they still find a way to label my lyric explicit/
My volcanic eruptions cause panic upon every planets domain/
Contained spirit energy that has tha power to thrash through any terrain/
Have you ever thought what your purpose was, maybe to start a fam wit a wife/
Or maybe your not important, you juss here to influence some 1 elses life/


DONT sleep, rate this

yo that shit was hard to understan
school me on some vocab lyrisits shit

LOL


AIM:Young Prophet oo

Have you ever thought what your purpose was, maybe to start a fam wit a wife/
Or maybe your not important, you juss here to influence some 1 elses life/

Maaan, this was a incredible peice. Nice vocab, good flow, but I think it'd sound better in an audio, thats my opinion. Peace.

not that incredible.. you had some big words I'll give you that.. it wasn't really anything special tho...

"my terminology is terrific/
Its crazy how I don't cuss but they still find a way to label my lyric explicit"..... I liked that bar still<---- that was probably the best thing you had in there..

not say'n it wasn't good 'cause it was, just not all that, nah'm'say'n dawg.. I just wasn't feelin' it.. I'll peep more of ya isht 'cause you do got potential fo-sho..

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I liked it, big words though, thats cool...keep wrting peep my shit dawg, i got Tight beat and home life

^^aight

Thankx, still uppin

UPPIN!!

damm, u on some canibus shit here man... lol...
Shit was pretty good man... like you said, you had some crazy vocab... flow was pretty good... but some bars were a bit to long for me... whatevah...
The post was nice and short... no real topic or nothing... but it shows you got skills... I give you props...

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Rapping about how dope you are with above-average vocabulary.

Hmmmm...

"Style-biting emcee sucker"

You should consider not hyping your stuff as being "vocab-oriented" if you want to match expectations vs. delivered product better. People will give you more respect if you don't pretend to be reinventing the wheel.

I better credit a piece like this when I hear it spit.
Websters is also an interesting read, but not ill. Ish.