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Old 04-21-03, 04:08 AM   #1
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The pump that i touch'll leave a pump in ya gut/ gunz "fukin" mad while im bustin a nut/ it wants to be pulled like a bitch in tha mall/ that sukz ya nut so hard she'll be spittin ya ballz/ i get crazy when my nerves is leavin me/ u get ate like bread at a bird scenery/ im a cloud im bout to get it started/ water u wit tha gun like flowers in tha garden/ bang u wit so much power your in orbit/ don't worry i'll be there in a hour to record it/ look at me and (ha) think wat u want/ but im shittin on writtenz like ink in tha butt/ i whistle while i work and break ya linkz/ i got a steel that'll prolly make u pink/ fuk pale when i bust real/ have u geesin away like u were part of duck talez/ i got duck tape and straight up i duck "tails"/ that don't make u stuck then my nut will/ cuz it got potential/ i got sumthin that smokes that'll prolly stop yo mental/if i don't got gunz then i'll pop a rental/ im hard like my dik ya'll cockz is gentle/ that'z just how my mental getz/ i just may have to cut u up wit utensil shitzsend u to tha dentist fo some dental shit/plus im stressed so i only smoke menthol stickz/ ya chik got me about hard/ so im bout to waste time on her only becuz the amountz large/ i don't make drama but drama makes me/ tha llama makes me, hit mama's baby'z/ i pick work on you/ matta fact i'll tarnish ya rapz like i just jerked on u/ i search ya bakround and then dig dirt on u/ show at ya funeral and "dig dirt on u".
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Old 04-21-03, 09:48 AM   #2
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you get ate like a bread at a ird scenery,that line made me laugh cat.i aiont into the whole gangst athing but some cats are and theyll have better criticism for ya.i cant really say much because i aint a fan of the style nahmean,bhut still keep elevating an postin ghsit and catsll respond.
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Old 04-25-03, 05:31 PM   #3
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that was ok.
keep writin and your shit will get better

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