this originally was stasrted in chat when i just unloaded on noone in particular, it really stimulates thoughts. its a rendition of thoughts that run through my head, theres even a lil philosophy


if every religion is based on the pursuit of happiness
then that makes God[or surperior being] the ideaology of hapiness

if happiness never comes, does that meen theres no god?
and if so, i wouldent be called a man, i wouldent live on land, fish wouldent be in the sea, because god is the one who called these things man land and sea.

my urges to kill are growingdly thru surpression,

i am addicted to blood, some times i cut myself just to lick the blood off of my arm or wrist, i sleep during the day, i cant stand the sun, does this make me a vampire?

i dont want to shoot anybody, i wt to stab and go into a frenzy and kill everything that moves untill my eyes are stained with the color of blood, does this make me a bad person?

i cant stand love, if love existed there wouldent be lust, humans are not designed to be mated for life, we are designed to be nomadic lovers, thou shalt not kill is a man made law, a law because some pussy 2000 years ago didnt wana die,

if there is no god, then do we work our whole lifes to acheive nothing? if there is a heaven is there a hell? my geuss is no, because every book of the bible is written by a different man, the bible was passed like a prison bitch

each book glorifies its author, as well as when the bible was written, how come it didnt mention anything from b4 biblical times exept the making of earth, what happened to dnosaurs and shit like that? also during these biblical times the rest of the werld such as america, south america and such wasent even known, so the bible only pertains to the middle east. what if were just germs on a germ, and some ones about to spray sum disenfectant. what if lifes like a video game such as the sims, or any game where u make a world, and god gets bored and deletes it, if i told u i was the son of god, would u call me crazy or worship me?

whoa!

your right..some pretty heavy though provoking statements
in this....

"i am addicted to blood, some times i cut myself just to lick the blood off of my arm or wrist, i sleep during the day, i cant stand the sun, does this make me a vampire?"

^felt that line something fierce....your really dug deep into your
mind to come up with this...or atleast thats how it seems..
you stated your opinions n beliefs with a strong backbone..
and it clearly comes thru....

The ending was left on a very powerful note..

great work

~Soul~

that stuff is pretty normal fori always do these emotinal dumps but ussaly i put them in open mic, but tonight i just didnt feel like ryhmin them, plus about 2 minutes b4 i wrote this i dropped an open mic, so thank you for the commeent, uppin

Why does it say you're banned? Did you put that under your name yourself?

Anyway, onto tjhe piece.

Kind of open mic, yet still quite poetic.

Some strong and fairly deep thoughts expressed quite well. Overall it was constructed raw and executed well.

...erm, that is all...


...resp....

im kinda feeelin this part Ryon.....deep interesting thoughts about life....definitely a good piece...i liked it

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I like the idea with this one. The shit is true too though. Nice.


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ty, it is raw cuz this isnt really sosed to sound like a poem cuz this shit is the stuff my brain thinks of, no word changed this is uncut str8 out the brain

uppin to let ya know the dangers of my mind -

look out for these upcoming Kapone Productions

Dangers of my Mind

and hopefully

Collab with ShIzNiT

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