people ask me why do i walk around cheezin/ the same reason haters walkin around bleedin/ you dont wanna fuck wit tha kid wonder i mean it/ ill fuck up ya frame and make sure ya girl seen it/ so...dont think im a quiet nigga/ call me a soccer fan cause i star riots nigga/and you dont want me angry wit two knives/ or im bound to make headlines like a doo-rag too tight/ on ya head is where the blade gone land/ and on the streets in a pot whole is where ya face gone land./ and know what i got ya main girl in/ niggas soft sort of like my waves when i get a S-Curl in./ jus because you rap u wanna act bad/ ill take ya brain and send it to ya moms in a wal-mart bag/ then you say thats some bad shit/ because i stay charged like i was born in battery acid!!!



Biatch i was jus playin around on this one hahahahahahaha!!!



holla at ya kid

you're much to cocky for what you just produced.....

it was aight for a newbie but be modest about your shit fa real kid.....

one,
Meta 5

was aight, i liked the battery acid line, i can tell ur gunna be gettin beat up tho, cuz ur cocky enuff to get vets to notice u, so one bit of advice is to tone down ya cockiness,


as for the ryhme, ill be nice and give ya... 6/10

haha id make you look like my son
cuz you sound like one

a little kid

press the enter key once in a while eh?
lol... i wont be as nice as scarface... i give it a 5/10 at best... you need a better topic, vocab, wordplay etc etc... you got talent so will soon elevate... keep rhymin

keep spitting,elevate your vocab,come up with original shit,ive heard halfyour lines somewhere before shits played,i aint a battle cat fan,but everyone has their own likes and dislikes,you seriously need to up your shit befor eyou go posting a title like ima kill all of you or whatevr you wrote,coz seriously cat youll have a team of cats bombing your ass until you just dont want it no more.dont get me wrogn i ain sayin nothign against you,but elevate and get some wins and then you can claim shit like your gonna kill cats,before you say what you say you have to prove it nahmean,keep elevatin...
bismillah

i think i should battle this kid to teach him some respect and humility. cocky bastard lol

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Kid_Wonder u're whack dawg...............Go read or sumthin

Atetrack define' stop bein so nice,,,,,this shti was just try hard GANGSTA rap......if u a gangsta then why ru rapping and why the hell ru on A RAP WEBSITE?????????????????????????????????????????

hahahha^^^^.....i thought it was a battle rap....guess not....lmao...gangstas have acess tot he interent too,just like all us normal cats now...pshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhh......fuck a gangsta rap