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Old 04-24-03, 01:43 AM   #1
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I got this dictionary played out

You made me into a dynasty a simplicit form of democrasy//
I played out your literacy while your were stuck in elementary//
Forever lost in silence I planned your "elite" comments//
elevate you say, to what level shale I denote these ignorance//
I'm diverse with an angelic point of view//
you say fuck me? well I say fuck you//
I can mix a little ghetoo in with my proverbs//
And make unknown sentences into real words//
Kneel before me as I limit your cranium seductions//
I can play out your game like it was an infraction//
troublesome thoughts can be obliverated by the SOUND OF MUSIC//
If you listen there is nothing but poetry to it//
Words of advice for those in despare//
No one will believe you if you dont even care//
Mental frustration on elaspsed time periods causes catarophies//
Say what you want but I made this life just for little me's//
For the true freestylers,the poets, and the DRUMLINE//
everything will come to you as me in time//
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Old 04-24-03, 04:25 AM   #2
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oh shit!! that is dope...
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Old 04-24-03, 06:46 AM   #3
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dictionary is played out but you spelled democracy and ghetto and despair and catastrophes wrong? haha just playin... but seriously... what were you trying to say cause i wasnt picking up anything with this one... very unlike you... it was good vocab but i think you forgot to put a topic to go with it... anyways it was cool i give it a 6/10... keep rhymin (like you used to)
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Old 04-24-03, 12:02 PM   #4
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well you had to see my replies in the other post to understand the topic. I probably should have put it up there.. Well lets just say it was me proving I know how to use vocab and that I'm not a "simple" person lol. ... yea.. it really had no topic accept vocab is good I know how and for everyone else to keep elevating.. thanks for replies though OoNnEe
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Old 04-24-03, 07:52 PM   #5
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the flow was hot, vocab was kill, jus wat i expected,
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Old 04-24-03, 11:35 PM   #6
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you truly are gifted i hope to see more and possibly collab if you allow
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Old 04-24-03, 11:37 PM   #7
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Tight vocabulary , tight concept , tight wordplay , hell every thing was tight on this joint , , keep droppin dawg
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Old 04-25-03, 01:46 AM   #8
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say word we can colab if you would like lol thank for the replies everyone. OoNnEe
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