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Old 04-25-03, 12:33 PM   #1
Bmack
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I've been with you now for twenty years by your side/

Even though you are not amongst us I feel your soul inside/

You left me before I was even born/

But mom still loves you and hopes you are strong/

And we'll see you again someday hopefully not too long/

Mom told me about stories when she concieved with you/

But the story goes from happiness to the grievin issue/

Why does God make the good die young/

And why did god have to take a mothers first son/

Brother I know if you was alive I wouldnt be here/

But God thought ya purpose belonged elsewhere/

In heaven up above serving the majesty/

While I'm down here in the real world fightin travesty/

If fate had its way I would be with you/

No one knows my struggle and how I care for you/

Cause no matter if I havent met you or not/

Your still my brother and have a place in my heart/

I have kept your secret inside me for twenty years/

Thats 365 tears a day and say nothin to my peers/

Your name was Charles its imbedded in my head/

But like a ghostly feeling at night I feel you watchin over me in bed/

My big brother in the spirtual form not the physical/

But you are real as anything, My twin individual/

Oh ya brother I got alot of enemies here/

They try to fight me and lie and bring out my tears/

But I live to fight the cowards another day/

Cause I know you help me out give me a path to run away/

My Big Brother he died when he was born/

But dont cry for him theres no need to mourn/

Cause hes got his blood brother connected by the heart/

And theres no way you could rip the two of us apart/

So my brother please dont cry your a angel in heaven/

R.I.P Charles Lemay passed on July 7th

I Love you brother and dont forget

Cause your memory is never forgotten and no ones upset/

We miss you and love you

And while you are lookin down we are lookin above too

So good night brother I hope you rest tight

Cause I know you are by my side and you show me the light


R.I.P Charles Lemay 7-6-80 7-7-80
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Old 04-25-03, 01:12 PM   #2
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very impressive didn't expect to see this piece to be so good tha flow was perfect the rhyme sceme was creative the topic was touchin it wasn't too complex but still it was a nice pice the ending needed like one more bar so it could end in rhythm but a hot piece anyways

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