yo this is me spitting at my boy kronox just for fun, what do ya'll think?

my punches leave your bitch ass seeing stars//
cause like a surgeon with parkinsons i'll leave you with scars/
you battling me is like holding a metal pole in a thunderstorm//
cause my flows are deadly like chemical weapons gaseous form//
you think your a gangsta son, god damnit your dutch!//
your flows plus punches plus rhymes plus style, oh dear... doesnt amount to much//
even showing up, its like your trying to fail//
you'll get fucked quicker than your first shower in jail//
damnit son its over, case closed, i'm through//
throwin in the towel is all thats left for you to do//

peace

[edit] yo and before you get to critical this was freestyle not like contemplated written shit [/edit]

lol that was prety funny. needs to be a little longer and could be a little more complex

uppin for more comments

hahah Combatjoe my boy
You having fun yet ?
Let's set up a battle for fun ?

Nice first verse tho
I allready read it on IRC

lmao... for once someone with some talent comes to rb...

It was ight

yo man u shouid be proud of yourself

If that was truely freestyle, then that was pretty good, nice multis, wish I can see the full verse but "damnit" good start

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

yea good shit for a first time

Ummmmm...needs work, kinda Basic....Go see battling 101 for good tips on how to elevate....
Other than that, it was straight for a newbie.....Final Answer

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