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Old 04-26-03, 01:31 PM   #1
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"Off My Chest"


I had my eyes on you from day one
You had this beauty and bliss
and eyes like the sun
that shone through the mist
I'd call you for the fuck of it
to let conversation unfurl
you weren't so quick to suck a dick
like one night relationship girls
and I respected you for that
I wanted to lie next to you for that
discusses some facts
and intellectually chat
cause you were more than just an ass
more then body and tits
I had dreams of us together
but you robbed me of it

Whhhyyy . . .

Why do we have to be friends?
Don't you know I'm better then half of these men

. . . we coulda had something . . .

Now all visions is dust
me and you . . .
I'm wishing it was us . . .

but its not . . .

What a turning of my fate . . .
I'm yearning like I'm burning at the stake
I feeling like the fish that took the bait
. . . and then got thrown back in the lake
bleeding heart and only half awake
I fell for you but now its you I hate

FUCK YOU . . .

Fuck you for deceiving me wrong
Fuck you for ever leading me on
Fuck you for leaving me hurted

. . . and fuck you for being so perfect

Why . . .




. . . and leaving me shirtless, alone, and hard
you sent me home with a permanent scar
you say that we're just friends
you just don't understand
its not that easy
I've tried time and time again

but my feelings are way to strong
to just be your friend
so if I can't see you as more
I don't wanna see you again

It's so sad . . .
You coulda got the best . . .

Now you got me here trying to get shit off my chest . . .
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Old 04-26-03, 06:52 PM   #2
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Well Dam*!!
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Old 04-28-03, 10:49 AM   #3
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Old 04-28-03, 11:28 AM   #4
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nice

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nice drop dawg i liked how u were sayin how u had some much for her and if yall cant be more than friends then u dont wanna be anythin i understand where u comin from dawg..keep it up
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Old 04-28-03, 12:27 PM   #5
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yo if u want come tryout for our crew go free agents and click on attention and drop a peice in there
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Old 04-28-03, 03:20 PM   #6
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nice..i was really feelin this one..
<hat a turning of my fate . . .
I'm yearning like I'm burning at the stake
I feeling like the fish that took the bait>BEST LINES...
nice drop...keep it up..1!
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Old 04-28-03, 09:28 PM   #7
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thanks ya. and Arealhomeboy im already in Merk squad. thanks tho.
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Old 04-29-03, 04:15 PM   #8
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Old 04-29-03, 04:20 PM   #9
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Old 04-30-03, 10:54 AM   #10
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very nice drop, well dun i would like to say mo but its left me thinkin. keep it up!
peace ~roX~
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Old 04-30-03, 05:25 PM   #11
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thansk up
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Old 04-30-03, 06:32 PM   #12
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This was cool,
to be honest i wasn't feeling the ending...

but i guess you had to get that stress of ya chest...

overall..nice poem dunz...

peep my shit..

peace
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Old 04-30-03, 06:39 PM   #13
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i feel this too......i guess weve all had that one girl that fucks up our world huh?
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Old 04-30-03, 10:56 PM   #14
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Alright i checked this out---And i think alot of you know where i stand on this tit-dick-fuck shit. I mean i'll look past it but it ruins the mood weather the peice is real or not. Your ideas are good but the way you write it from your thought could be soo much more. But honestly i think im biased because i cant stand the style of this particular written. im half and half on it Some nice Some not soo nice---my opinion but for the readers that enjoy keep reading--
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Old 05-01-03, 01:43 PM   #15
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thanks yall up
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