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Old 04-26-03, 10:12 PM   #1
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Life Has No Meaning

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Make A Brief Appearance From Tha Cave Of Holy Depression
Hold Me Infection, Lassoed By Tha Kid Basking In Deception
Tha Intersection Turned Me Lost, Tha Cement Or Dirt Road
As We Hold Hands In Tha Garden Of Concrete Tha Turf Grows
This Work Load Has My Stature Excrementing Thinner Blood
Percieve Tha Winner Of Eternal Loss As Tha Burdens He Lugs
Doubled Handedly Drags Up Tha Mountain, His Steps Sovereign
Nails A Hammock To Tha Colored Poles Bemusing Winter Springs
Tha Gift Of Sin Presented Under Your Xmas Tree's Snow Angel
I Blunder From Tha Pinnacle And Light Tha Infernal Fanals
If Non Fiction Is Never Ending Then Why Am I Seeing Omega?
So I Can Travel To Hassle Los Angeles And Sink Tha Lakers
Put A Little Wager On The Inefficient Stud, Any Takers?
As It Drains My Break Even Figures I Rattle Anthems With Salt Shakers
What? You Expect Me To Follow This Route With No Correct Map
Greetings Mr. Beelzebub, To You I Salute And Take Off My Hat
As I Extract Cash, The Underpaid Actor Hinders These Villagers
With An Itchy Trigger Finger Playing Convert Saints To Sinners
As Gun Shots Ring In This New Day Im Making My Promised Wish
If I Hope For Coal, I May Indeed Recieve My Undesired Gift
Im Tha Subsequent Farmer, Who Harvests Bin Ladens And Big Twins
My Stable Is Stale But Balanced, Housing New Jerseys And Pig Skins
I Wade Through Tha Populous With Undercover Specs And Threads
Like Prof Plum With Set Up Death's, Just To Tell Me Its Tha Best
When You Return From Tha Other Side To Indulge In Haunting
Turning Back Is Not An Option, Complaining Its Cold And Boring
Hold Tha Fortune, If I Reincarnate Im Tha Next Best Thing
Twice Tha Price Of Sliced Bread And Exhaulted Like A King
Under This Bridge My Abode Is A Cube And My Mirror Ripples
I Harbour Defamation, Embracing Head On As My Career Fizzled
My Time Is Frivolous As My Thoughts Combine At Tha Commonplace
Jocking This Jester Is Like Saying "There's More To Space"
Store My Trace In Your Basement, Inside That Malleable Case
Insoluble Atomical Structure, My Name Is Retrievable Waste
Make Haste In Its Disposal, Emotions Heated Like Postal Workers
Left My Embarresing Clarity On Tha Train, Tha Focals Worthless
My Man, Why Are You Pointing That Barrel At My Secure Vertex?
Possesed By Jedi Commands?, Endevouring To Endure Learning
Are You A Foreign Version Merging With Tha Image Of Lucifer?
Rocking Killing Material In Denial About Whether It Suited Ya
I Spy With My Cyclops Eye A Single Appetizing Slice Of Pie
We Breach Tha Perimiter When I Signal That Tha Timing's Nigh
Make A Break For Tha Sill As This Hankerchief Meets Tha Grass
My Brain And Its Appendage Troops Will Make Tha Eating Last
As We Triumph Ima Run This White Flag Up This Vertical Mast
Wake Like Murray To Hurry Tha Fact Im Trapped Terminal In This Past

And So I Slip.......

......Determined For Recreation

Mechanical Vision Plots Us Seeking Upon Dispersed Knowledge
One Turn To Release Tha Die Within Only One Term Of College
Tha Worm Of Foiling Attracts Tha Early Bird Into Its Tides
Escape Is Virtual Reality Repeated At Least One Hundred Times
Thunderous Skies In Visual Motion, Crossing Tha Bridges Broken
Insight Grasps On 20 Seconds Later About That Twisted Slogan
Listen Chosen Being, Your Grace Has Been Selected For Arrival
Procreational Expansion Is Tha Goal Everyone Has To Fight For
But Lifes Door Is Beyond Tha Constricted Corridoor Of Penumbra
Skeletons Lock You In Tha Closet And Sell Lies To Dooms Child
Where Tha Spoon Lies Is Where You'll Find Tha Hidden Answers
Follow Tha Trail Of Caviar Traces Untill Your Missing Grandson
Perception Is Fabricated, Not All Tha Images Make Perfect Sense
Commitment's Like A Dash Through Hell, You Have To Determine When
Learning's Spent Like 50 Cent Inside Tha Depths Of A Coin Op
Thats Why I Slouch Here Uneven Just Waiting Untill My Poise Drops
Tha Future Is Tha Objective, While Internal Change Is Tha Aim
Paramedics Dispose Of Anatomies While Saving Inadequate Brains
For What Academic Transplants? Or Is Their Role A Fairy Tale
Volentary Quails Insist On Being Part Of This Sunken Vessels Sail
Expressed Detail Is Worthless If Tha Piece Is About Nothing
But Never More Will I Come To Baltimore To Scout These Buzzards
Spout These Dozens Of Commercial Branches Like A Common Franchise
And Watch Tha Monarchy Supression Like A Sovereign Landslide
Switch On Tha Box To Indulge In Recreational Procrastination
Im Tha High School Student Thats Lacking Educational Fascination
Emancipation Increases Every Year Through Tha Depletion Of Evil
Its All Been Done Before, Tha Motivation In This Season Of Sequels
"Im Leaving Tha Seat For One Minute, If Im Not Back Dont Panic"
I'll Either Be In Tha Bathroom Or Inside Of Tha Lobby Standing
How Did We Manifest Into Hermits Forgotten By This Society?
Who Formed Our Figures? And Who Created Tha Vast Different Varities?
Picture Tha Worker, Stacking Shelves To Make A Dishonest Living
Then Look At Tha Opulent Snob Whos Homaged Without Lifting A Finger
My Actions Are Significant To Tha Sole Who Raises An Eyebrow
Tha Ambitions Of A Saint Can Be Seen Outside When You Lie Down
Tha End Justifies Tha Means, But Everyone Ignores Tha Alpha
Beggining Of Strife Was Conceived By Tha Collapse Of Two Towers
Tha Old And Tha Young Dependent On Our Long Term Achievements
But Is There Any Meaning To Life If We All Just Gave Up Breathing?
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Old 04-26-03, 10:39 PM   #2
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LONG AS HEL AND ILL AS FUCK! Mad vocab, and u got some skillz...i never heard of a Russian Rapper but that would be crazy!
VOCAB - 10/10
FLOW - 10/10
Multis - 7/10
Wordplay - 8/10
TOPIC - 10/10

WOW...maaaad props on this one N...u got my respect for real...
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Old 04-26-03, 11:49 PM   #3
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Tight , , but too long , , datz why u wont get alot of Feedback
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Old 04-27-03, 11:17 AM   #4
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Well If You Don't Get Feedback Because Of The Length, It Just Goes To Show What Herbs Really Are....I'd Like To See This Epitomizing My Point.

Anyway Thanks For The Feedback...Always Appreciate A Couple Of 10/10's LoL
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Old 04-27-03, 11:26 AM   #5
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lmao... its too long... and sitting at computers for long intervals at a time create poor eyesight and a bad back... and carpal tunnel syndrome from all that typing... do you use a thesaurus very often?
yeah vocab as usual is good, along with flow... you spelled the wrong so you get 9/10... lmao... nice drop as usual...
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Old 04-27-03, 12:06 PM   #6
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Aghhhh Fuck It, I Wrote Out Some Long Winded Reply And It Just Fucked Up...HAHAHA

Thanks For The LoL Reply inspire

Last edited by N-Demik : 04-27-03 at 12:09 PM.
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Old 04-27-03, 12:21 PM   #7
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good to see i'm spreading the good word of grammar... return the reply favor on mine... (and dont do a spellcheck either... cause i already did!:P damn typos...)
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Old 04-27-03, 12:27 PM   #8
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excellent spit,first two lines had me hooked as usual n-demik,thats my weak point i always go blank starting my shit off...

Insight Grasps On 20 Seconds Later About That Twisted Slogan
Listen Chosen Being, Your Grace Has Been Selected For Arrival

liked those two lines right there,shit was nice.
always liking your drops n-demik...you gotta put osme of thi son audio someitme,itd be hella mad.props


returnt he favour sometime cat...
bismillah

the shit about forgetting the starting,the alpha was true cat,and hte strive caused by the towers is right,nothign good ll come of that shit,its already being used as fuel to push a military mindstate into the populace.
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Old 04-27-03, 01:27 PM   #9
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Nice Piece Dem... It Muchly Deserved ta Go in Rb's Illest... Vocab Was ''Top Notch'' Usual... Wordplay Was Good...

My Fav Lines Are:

Im Tha Subsequent Farmer, Who Harvests Bin Ladens And Big Twins
My Stable Is Stale But Balanced, Housing New Jerseys And Pig Skins
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Old 04-28-03, 08:04 PM   #10
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Thanks For The Replies...

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Old 04-28-03, 08:12 PM   #11
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yo demik ,, check ur Private messages , , cause i send u a message
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Old 04-28-03, 08:40 PM   #12
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yea boy, i was def. feelin every word yo fo' real playa, u gotz skillz dawg fo' real, damn, shit was off da hook,

return tha fava and check out my drop, Dear Dad, thx
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Old 05-03-03, 11:35 AM   #13
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Thanks..

To Tha Apex I Guess
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Old 05-03-03, 12:14 PM   #14
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good rapping, i could do better if i wanted to (i wish),
it was too long, me read and get headace from all those long n hard words
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