awww yeah

Theres no rights no wrongs when im writing this song// Like when eminem did a rap with elton John//Im just spittin this shit just to be spittin it// If I showed my mutha this joint she would have a fit// D12 have a song called suck my dick , so why can i not have a song called lick my tit// Some of the raps on this site are shit//bash dont even comment, or ill have to whoop your ass// I dont own no Bling Bling im not very flash//I dont care what you think about dis song, Just like sisqo when he had that thong song//You either love it or you hate or you to scared to feel it//Haters can hate cos im white or hate cos im the new hype// i aint here to start a fight but some bodys gonna die tonight// I understand you think im shite but I dont turn a rap queen over night//Its gonna take a lot of skill to get were I WANT// But if i dont succed thats just me// gonna be a nobody without the sexy body//im only a beginner so I cant say im a winner but I can buy my own dinner when Fat Joe gets finner.


yo I dont want a lot of shit bout my name feminem.....so if you are real rappers you will respect ....you all been at it prob for yrs I have been at it for a while but im still young 14..if you could give me some tips id be grateful..

this drop was aight ,, , ,return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6880#post386880

aight.........do u FUCKIN LISTEN drop dis obsession with eminem, c'mon gurl, shut da fuck up bout em and D12 shit i tried ta tell ya in ya last post, shit i wrote lik a ful page note to ya ta try ta help, and no one gives a fuck wat age u are, look at me i'm only 14 and i signed w/ bash and hes 21, and dont even start puttin vets in ya song lik bash, cause n e one on dis site will rip u apart soooooo bad sweetie aint even funny, look u got talent, ok, just quit bein some bullshit, fake ass chick who only raps cause she likes eminem, lik i said befo' either start takin bout REAL LIFE not dis fake one u creatin, and dont tell us if we were real rappers we would give respect 2 u, cause there is absolutly NO rapper in da game dat wuld give u respect da way u rappin right now, lik i said be ur self and u'll improve, LISTEN when i say dis shit cause i kno, if u wanna learn sum metaphores, smilies den check out 12cent hooligan, bash ( dont giv a fuck if u dont lik him, he drops ill shit) word~play, and even me, ( srry ta everyone who drops mad and i forgot ta say,) im a say dis shit one more tim i suggest u LISTEN UP, we aint dissin u, we sayin u gotz sum talent, but be ur self and drop dis lov fo' eminem and feminem, or get da fuck off da site, and stop rappin period..........dont tak dis up da ass, use wat i tell u ta mak ya self betta, and betta, aight?

^^^dam homie liluptight aint ya?

But i g2 agree w/him.If u cant be real then u should put tha mic down.Dont try to be like ne1 else,shoutin ppl out dat dont deserve it,and startin sh!t wit sum1 who'll rip u a new a$$hole.Not a good start mink.Dont try so hard jus let it flow na'mean.Stay ^
-Avi

yea my bad, i was a lil up tight my bad gurl, excuse me im hella sick today,so im in a fucked up mood,but everythin i said was tru but i shoulnt a said it lik i did,

Hun, I will get your name changed for you. Why not just do it? It would make this flow a lot easier.

Yeah i agree wit soilder, but i also agree there is people u look up too...Like eminem, or gangstarr or anybody. You try to spit like em, but thats where you gotta take that away and rap for ya self...Speak whats in your eyes your heart...Who cares what fucken name you go under...Ya ryhmes are ok...But stop spittin bout d12 etc etc...Speak bout yourself what your opticals let ya see..

Holla

Yo Drop Eminem obsession, and listen to Bruklor, but I still liked it, yo come peep my shit.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42342

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this was the shit baby.
i look like eminem.....
think i could get some...head...eh?

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well I dont care what obsession you have lol everyone has one... mine happens to be death.. just thought I'd drop that in there.. But anyways here's some of my help.. You could work on vocab and word play.. I didn't really feel a beat to it ya know? make sure when your typin this shit you can say it and feel a rhyme to it.. a beat ya know? Keep elevating. OoNnEe

there wasnt much there about eminem, well it doesnt matter somone has to be ur rappin idiol, well the vocabulary needs major tweakin, and that song wasnt that good, u need to work on it, and so what if ur 14