rules
1- 10-15 lines
2- no d/riding or c/votes
3-must post within 20 minutes of mine or you forfeit
4- let's do this

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I'm crewless/ so it's useless, trying to battle me on the solo!
So is it kool if i leave ya toothless and smash off kicking up major gravel!/
Rustle and Wrangle you up!/ knock you off of your saddle!/
And just like your daddy would/ i'll put you over my knee and give you a paddle!/
Go taddle!/ if you must/ pm someone to get a vote!/
but i'm real with this here/ YOUNG DEE is never no HOUX!/
practice your methods/ and go over your raps!/
but when i'm through with you, i'll be the one that cancelled all of your plans!
Kool-killa i'll peel ya!/ like i was getting ready to fry some taters!/
your raps are so weak/ you couldn't reach me, if you couldn't get past the gators!

20 minutes? thats a gay ass rule....anyways i was already writin a battle...here:

*graps tha mic and gets in mic dee's face*

ayo:

fuck CAPS i spit rage, when iam in tha sick phrase, my punches will blast your rip cage, like i was spitting ‘fire’ with 12 gauge//
stoppin me on this page, thats like bein paid minimum wage, and tryin to sue bill gates//
lyrically gifted, metaphorically vicious, who said satan's wicked? they lied, iam more malicious//
i still havent said shit~you dont wanna test this, cuz i bring real piss, that will hurt this bitch, and make him wanna quit//
oh shit-my bad, iam being i dick-like ya dad, i shudda make this handi-capped, and like your dad, busted in ya ass a big gap//
young dee, tha wackest mc, cudnt bust a cap if he busted his knee, I spit tightly, your worthless like a batter out in strike three, so heres summtin: bite me//
And I aint jokin, your hopin, to blaze me..but youll die choking, cuz I been dead~they just left the casket open//
You cant be copin, with this lyrical overdosin, youll be soakin~ wet~ cuz my rhymes a-dick an iam strokin//

this is supposed to be a flow and not written! SUCCA

yeah thats a flow! i was already writin your verse dumb fuck....besides how can this be a live freestyle if it aint awdio?....
uppin!

uppin....

uppin

kool-killa won this on becuase he had better punches and he had some phat flow, nice job linking all of your sentences 2gether so that most of it ryhmed seamlessly, keep l-e-v8-n, both of u

uppin for one more vote....
comon peeps i know i voted on some battles...
thanx to yall that voted...

UPPIN

dont sleep on this yall...

kool took this
face-man explained it perfectly

ayo thanx for tha votes...i guess i won....waitin on a mod