verse 1:
we cleaver, we can last forever, stayin together,
But however, we will have rough weather, Me leavin you is like never, You done captured my Heart, Nothings going to tear us apart, I will never depart, this is just the start, Im doing my part, lyrics is my art,
One day Im a be on the charts, and you'll be by my side, So I can provide, you with a good life, but take it in stride, All the tears you cried, you need to get ya eyes wide, cuz I'd like you to be my bride, you my bonnie can I be your clyde, so dont leave me denied, dont keep your feelings inside, these lyrics is my feelings Im a confide, but you gotta decide, so we can be each others guide, and glide, like we had wings in the sky, I aint gonna lie, sometimes I cried, wish I would die, dealing with all this pain, aint gonna lie, sometimes I cried, wish I would die, dealing with all this pain, dont sigh, look me in my eye, tell me why, you was so shy, scared to come up an say hi, so you know I, aint no other guy, girl I do care, Im a always be there, so we need to say a prayer, cuz this love we got is rare, we like cards a perfect match a pair, I think love is in the air, so dont be scared, lets let this love glare, and flame flare, and have a life together that we share, people tryin to get between us thats not fair, but I swear, I hope your aware, I love you nothing can compare, so I declare, you better prepare, cuz its only right, that I hold you tight,

chorus:
my delight, the flame that you ignite, it burnin bright, you was quite right, Im your shinning knight, when I make love to you tonight, the worlds I love you Im a recite

verse 2:
as Im controlin your spine, while our bodys recline, an interwine, no need to rush Im a take my time, I hope you know, like usher Im goin nice and slow, I had you from the word hello, you was gonna be mine, you my shrine, the reason I shine, because of you I put down the steel nine, everytime I see you I get weak in the knees, with you around life is a breeze, you got the softer side of a thug, for me to hold, kiss, cuddle, and hug, Jesus sent you from above, for me to love, I just hope Im everything your dreamin of, I want to be your one and only, with me you'll never feel lonely, so just hold me, you was so shy, scared to come up an say hi, so you know I, aint no other guy, girl I do care, Im a always be there, so we need to say a prayer, cuz this love we got is rare, we like cards a perfect match a pair, I think love is in the air, so dont be scared, lets let this love glare, and flame flare, and have a life together that we share, people tryin to get between us thats not fair, but I swear, I hope your aware, I love you nothing can compare, so I declare, you better prepare, cuz its only right, that I hold you tight,

uppin for some feedback

ummm, it was strange because the verses are VERYU short

uppin for some feedback

come on now , dont sleep

it was aight but the verses seemed a little off at the end.

uppin

it was good, but i kno u can do betta, it was late las night so u were probably tired when u wrote dis... anyways u could keep it as it is or make some changes when u feel lik writin, well nice drop, im out ....much respect brotha...

^^^^
same thing he said...just wanted
u to acknowledge the fact that I read
ya post
*~Holler~*