Yo this is my 3rd go at a decent spit G, my other 2 efforts are shit i wanna delete them so bad dawg.
My last one was whacked bad by bash, but yo i drew from dis and come up wid dis wayu think?


Ay yo read dis slow, let it flow

Yo cheak it/
Yo bash you no much about the rap game?/
No? well look, stay, read and listen/
Yo bash i read yo shit/
Dude i think yo a master of this shit/
Some of yo shit is real dope/
and the rest deserves to be played to da pope "u hope"/
But a hold up a min bro/
U aint the pope atlest thats what i hope/
Rap for me is about hope/
I dont beleive u have to be nesserserily dope/
I aint dope or good/
But yo when i grab a M-I-C n start to spite it/
I aint living in hell no more/
I aint gotta come home too no whore "hitting my head on da door"/
My lyrics aint clever/
but hey i still persevere n try too endeavour/
My shit is for me/
If others dont relate and like it, i dont care/
But too go around dissing/
Just aint fair/
Dude when ur dissing u just missing/
I dont got a gun/
Neither has my hood/
But who gives a fuck whigga/
Least i aint gotta run from da gun/
means i can just have fun/
HAHA/
I aint trying to preach/
hell i dont wanna teach/
But dis game is about "FREEDOM OF SPEECH"/
Not for yo to go round and linch/
I got a style/
U may find it vile/
what whatever tho go lay me a pile "of shit"/
Yo we all apart of da same COMMUNITY/
What da fuck gives you "IMUNITY"/
I bet yo only just reached "PUBITY"/
And while i got dis M-I-C lemme say what the fuck is whack?/
Yo u mean bush whack right/
Oh no u mean my flow wacked/
Hell u proberly think i should pack "go home"/
But fuck dat, I spite for me not you/
Im open to comments/
Like dawg! try this try that/
Or even like dis like dat/
But hey I cant take yo CRAP/
So stick ur face in my LAP "ur turn to blow"/
So who gives a fuck if im whack/
Yo lets go back down da track/
Didnt i advise yo not TOO/
Hell u ainty got TOO/
Shit whigga its better not TOO/
So yo now im done, ima go hit um up in KINGDOM KONG "ur dumb"/
Word/
Much luv playa's, I gotta go say my preyers/
I hope to fuck they get anserd/
I suppose i gotta go learn to be a playa "not a preyer"/
So yo I hope you no, I rap for pleasure, not FAME, Shit that'd just be LAME/
oh.

Well my bruva's n sister's is dit da shit or no?
Bash i aint hating u bruv i just drew from yo dissing.
I hope you like it.

i got u dawg , , , , i'm a spit back at u soon

yea fosure, but ay is dis better or what?

Whack , , dawg u need better lyrics , , ur lyrics are too simple dawg

its ma style G, i aint a hater, i aint any playa G i just spit cus i luv it, go figure g

Sorry dog but bash is right. way too simple

ight im sick a dis simple shit/
yall think rap is da same/
man ur melody's are tame ima fuck up yo game/
yall say im whack but what da fuck im back/
ima keep rymin, ima keep it simple/
yo all da best rappers shout KEEP IT SIMPLE/
can they all be wrong, gee ur shits to long/
make rap for da people, and keep it simple/
i might be pimple on yo dick, i might not be dope like yall are/
but who gives a fuck/
ima trying hard, spitting from my heart/
keeping it real maybe abit sereal/
i make my shit for the people, not just for hard ass foes/
ill battle anyone yall, i may loose/
but i aint tightanin dis noose/
ill be back wid a rap again and again/
ima keep having a crack whilst yall smoking crack/
i dont give a fuck if u dont like it/
ima new whigga on da block/
my shit you aint going to lock/
dis hear is only my 4th melody, i been dissed on um all, by yall/
spitting dont need to be complicated or over rated/
ima keep trying my best, writing more mulling it in my head/
one day i know ill get it/
one day i now ill get the props i deserve/
my sheer effort and work ethic is incredible/
un-describibal incredible, i dont wanna be famouse/
i dont wanna be a rapstar gangsta/
im just follewing my passion in my own fasion/
i aint leeching or copying im origanal/
i do listen to my heroes flow/
and thats why i keep it simple.

^^^no comment , , dawg if u dont elevate then peeps wont read ur shit ,, , cause we tired of tellin u too elevate ,, and u never do it

explain dawg elivate my lyrics? u mean tighten my flow and make it less simple again

jus evaluate ya vocab, needs work...peace

your vocab, wordplay, similes, every aspect of a good rhyme.. you don't have it.. say'n my shit's a'ight.. dawg, compared to this mine is like platinum.. lol..

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uppin

LOOK HECK OUT MY SHIT. I DRO SHIT ALL THE TIME AND WHEN PEOPLE TELL ME TO ELEVATE I DO.WHAT YOU NEED IS CHARISMA,SPUNK,COCKINESS,WHAT YOU NEED IS TO BE SURE OF YOURSELF.IT DONT MATTER HOW WACK YOU ARE JUST BE SURE OF YOURSELF, KEEP IN MIND THAT YOU ARE THE GREATEST RAPPER IN THE WORLD AND THEN RAP. GOOD LUCK