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horrible |
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good |
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1 | 25.00% |
tight |
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1 | 25.00% |
HOT!!! |
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2 | 50.00% |
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expressions .....feedback please
IP:
check this out
yo when i spill this shit, im dilligent, with this illin shit/ killin it, building wit, my minds thought and the skill i spit/ like "fugees" wit no "praz" im flowin sick with no flaws/ drop ur jaws when u hear the treble from this rebel wit no cause/ no need for applause, appreciation is no necessity/ as long as i know im relentlessly spittin ill progresively/ freestylins what can replenish me, from whats been stressin me/ ability to speak real wit ease, is like a blessin see/ cuz it helps to relieve the pains n restriants that only taints/ ...the image i gotta portray to make gains, though pain stil remains/ but i still regain, the undyin strain to maintain the strength i claim/ the strength to "shoot" for goals, and make it the length i "aim"/ never fill in the blank the same, cuz real emcees dont reciprocate/ i just flip the hate, to rip the state, of mind im in and spit it straight/ helps to relieve, the pressures received, from wearin my heart on my sleeve/ hard to believe, but like EVE perceived "love IS blind" for me its harder to see/ harder to be, the standard expectation for this hexed set nation/ knowin i need an education, but cant activate my minds complex sensations/ confused in all of lifes angles, school, women n home life just strangles/ chokin, provokin my inner thoughts to get mangled n left dangled/ cant understand it, how im handed, highs but then so many lows n'/ i can't get back on track of lifes path... cuz i aint got one chosen/ hopefully soon i can resume from the doom, n prove to bloom/ but for now im choose my room, to reside n write to sooth the wounds/ i relize theres people with worse troubles, problems that double/ but i gotta write to mend this rubble, cant pretend its subtle/ to the world this my end rebutal, i sit n wait for lifes next lessons/ til the next session, this recitin of writin is my expression holla at ya kid |
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IP:
responses please
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BANNED for biting
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Tight , tight , tight , tight drop , , ,dawg that drop was extremely tight , ILL shit
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IP:
bad brotha, u in a crew cause u got skillz, think about join us B.R.E. ....dat was ILL
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