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Old 05-01-03, 09:39 PM   #1
cmo da cataclysm
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no freestylin freestylers (AN ACTUAL FREESTYLE!!!!)

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yo i wrote this shit off my head so if it weak...who giva fuck anybody can prewrite

ight look....

tired a mutha fuckas bitin jockin my style
only reason they spit is cause of they fuckin tv
wouldnt know a bar if it wasnt a 8-mile
fake fuckas only rappin cause eminem hit dvd

switch it up

i bust mutha fuckas like baloons and pop they shit
stomp a bitch quick cause i assumed they jockin scripts
remained to spit like tobacco these niggas wacko
born to crack hoes spittin rhymes for me to debacle
i laugh tho, cause i leave enormous emcee casualities
fake rappas seem to storm us but then-see fatalities
no formality, time fo the skilless to deploy and host yalls decisions
cause reality, my freestyles destroy most yalls prewrittens
tonality, is deep and harsh, show no remorse
no talent g's, you'll reap and mark my flow of course
cause half of you mutha fuckas sentences are insolent
wit unhead of flows like your eminem on infinite
without a gun ill set spirits runnin from men
ill just point and click and let lyrics run from my pen
if my spits retort, its from your acquired dvd style
you kids fell short, u died on the 7th mile

it took me 10 minutes to do that, is it really that hard?

gimmie feedback if u feel like it, good or bad i dont giva fuck holla
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Old 05-01-03, 11:17 PM   #2
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ight mutha fuckas quit sleepin, say it good or bad or somethin
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Old 05-02-03, 08:05 AM   #3
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i think it lacked but not much i enjoyed reading and you definetly put some tyruth in it i wonder how it would sound on audio
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Old 05-02-03, 09:21 AM   #4
cmo da cataclysm
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appreciate it.......more feedback niggas
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Old 05-02-03, 03:13 PM   #5
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that shit was dope nigga you did your thing
Holla
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Old 05-02-03, 03:18 PM   #6
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nice drop G, shit was foreal
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