DO YOU FEEL ME

Right now I think I’m feelin the hell outta you
I found a jewel
‘be mine’ – I wanna shout at you
in a crowded room
wit lovers, emcees, you know, talented fools
Sorry bout all the gossip around our crew
I just thought I sounded cool
Cuz I wanna see more, learn more, love more about you
But shorty don’t let that lead you
In the wrong direction
Cuz like I know there’s been people
Who made u keep on guessin
It’s a hard lesson when you find
Your lover’s heart-less, and
Maybe your past girls were far from heaven
But me and you, you know, if we give it a try
And like what we see, we could get God’s blessin
See I don’t know just what you’re thinking, but I
Can definitely tell you that I’m feelin ya vibe
If I wrote you a love letter, would I receive a reply?
Cuz even tho we’ve been known to freak on the side
I’m still all about keeping my pride...
But let me clue you in on a lil secret of mine
I’ma steal ya heart, cuz see I’m a thief in disguise
I’m sick of past timez and all the cheatin and lies
And I’m anxious to be the numba one thing in ya life
See I know you want it too from what I see in ya eyez...

no i dont feel u

ima hav 2 say tha same, but at least u tried....jus post sum otha shit and u'll only getbetta gurl....peace and much love

well i dont feel u at all

give the kid a break!!!! the weak part about ur rhyme was definitely the first half, ur word play was weak and ur lines were way too short.....

but in the second half of it, u picked it up, word play much better and lines a lot longer