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05-03-03, 07:17 AM
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what you think
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Never step out side I'd get eating alive//
Im not scared but every time they see me they deprive me// I want to beat the shit out of them but theres to many// I sit and listen to my rap beats and I vibe// Release all my anger with a pen to a page// It like I build up my rage at such a young age// My mother is worried that I will be killed by the streets// I turn to achohol and illegal and non illegal drugs// Move out of my home and live with the thugs// The ones who deprive me before do it no more// Ive over come my problem they will hurt me no more// Got a daughter at four and her dad is 24// She runs the block everyday with the same clothes on her back// Her skin is have white have black// What goin on in her mind when her mum sells crack// Ive tryed to stay clean but I always get put of track// I should have stayed at home and tryed to rap// At least thats something that I was good at// Instead im here with a boyfriend that talks so much crap// Even in front of the kid he gave me a slap// Just a beginning needs work |
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05-03-03, 10:59 AM
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IP:
yo this is 1 of th first pieces by u that i've felt that was pretty dope, but simple vocab used
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05-03-03, 11:00 AM
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hit my shit up its called "Remaining Unrecognized Part 1"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8513#post398513 Last edited by tRiLL : 05-03-03 at 11:04 AM. |
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05-03-03, 04:00 PM
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Re: what you think
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if u gotz a daughter why aint u talk bout her befo'.....i kinda think dat shit is a lie....????? i dont kno, but i almost felt u on dat one keep workin on it, lik was said befo' u gotz 2 evaluate da vocab, and wordplay, its from da heart but its to simple....peace out... |
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05-03-03, 07:33 PM
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IP:
this was overall good, it is a lot better than all of the other stuff u done
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05-03-03, 07:37 PM
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this drop is ur first tight drop on RB , , , tight shit dawg , , i was feelin it , ,, yo soilder give her some props dawg
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05-03-03, 07:54 PM
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aight i guess im too hard on u.....nice drop.....
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05-03-03, 10:45 PM
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IP:
nice drop but i agree w/solider a lil bit.Sum of dat sh!t seems unrealstic but u still did alot betta than tha last pieces.Stay ^
-Avi |
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05-03-03, 11:00 PM
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she doesnt have no daughter she's 14
yo hit my shit up its called "Remaning Unrecognized Part 2 n part 3" http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43639 |
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05-03-03, 11:21 PM
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by tRiLL
[B]she doesnt have no daughter she's 14 hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahah ahahahahhahahahhahahahahhahaha . . so let me see , , she's 14 and her son is 7 ,, , , so she had her son at da age of 7 , , hahahahahahahahhahaha Last edited by Bash : 05-03-03 at 11:23 PM. |
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05-04-03, 12:39 AM
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it was good
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why is that so funny? |
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