1 rule
2o lines macks


ill spit first


In the white room with black curtains near the station./
Blackroof country, no gold pavements, tired starlings./
Silver horses ran down moonbeams in your dark eyes./
Dawnlight smiles on you leaving, my contentment./

I'll wait in this place where the sun never shines;/
Wait in this place where the shadows run from themselves./

You said no strings could secure you at the station./
Platform ticket, restless diesels, goodbye windows./
I walked into such a sad time at the station./
As I walked out, felt my own need just beginning./

I'll wait in the queue when the trains come back;/
Lie with you where the shadows run from themselves./

At the party she was kindness in the hard crowd./
Consolation for the old wound now forgotten./
Yellow tigers crouched in jungles in her dark eyes./
She's just dressing, goodbye windows, tired starlings./

I'll sleep in this place with the lonely crowd;/
Lie in the dark where the shadows run from themselves./

wooo this is a battle. No editing igght you gots to keep that.

Yo I'll hit this when it's done, til then come peep this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43406

P.S.Yo Picker a battle is when you attack the other person

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Picker coming at me like an angry three year old./ This is like a poker game and this kat needs to fold./ Try to pull a knockout with all the punches o wait there aint none./ This is the 20th century come on dogg weres all the action./ Leave this kat crippled the way he gets his de-feet./ This kats hiding in the shadows cause he cant stand the heat./ Bring this kat down to my cellar, rip out his core./ Leave a bookmark cause im coming back for more./ Box up the leftovers leave at your girlfriends door./

hit this up

comeon people

picker go to poetic scriptures, your perfect for that and as for will con i liked your shit even though alot of its been used before like de-feet but still it wasnt even close will con got this one for showre holler at your hampsters haha

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

VOTE people

yo picker this a battle not a poetry cafe will got this one on lock

check out my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43502

vote on the pollls

that vote for you dont count you voted for yourself or Mbenz messed up

vote

dont sleep on this

vote

lol will con killed him picker go join a poetry contest