in the plural my verbal pierces ur epideral/ i am ready to destroy your bioneural till your blood starts to currdle/ im shakespere witout a journal/ i always come off tite like overweight hoes in gurrdles/ rhymes stay furtile/ your skillz less than impress me/ i leave your organs internal in the state of cataplexy/ son you coundnt rock if ya name was elvis presley/ so dont adress me unlesss u want it to ge messy/ im tellin u i been i'll since i came out my fathers testes/ so tset me and prepared to get sniped like westley/ a question for you , do yuo write rhymes or bit lines/ here i'll put some lipstick on ya your forehead so u can make up ya mind / ive worked hard for everything i earned and learned/ yur absurd splurges are not what i deserve

that was dope
good flow
no real topic or nething but whatever good wordplay on tha make up ur mind hah i was feelin it
hit up my drop

this drop was tight , but u should have made it longer , ,, and next time , type ur verse like dis ,,,,
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sway return da favour , , , dat means to click on da link i am givin u because it is my drop , , ,click on it and give me some feedback http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=43392

yo dawg that was hott! but ya boi needs a lil more werk! but u fucin tore itup ! u a beast ! hit me back up

a yo sway...yo verse was good...but U tellin me i need werk...phh hav u read any of my otha posts, but i admit i was in writas block a lil so it was a lil off and i didnt use very good vocab.... but c'mon dawg quit hatin...peace

com on ! hatin tho! iu ant hattin! at all! i was jus sayin u ant do as good as some of ya otha flows! i mean damn u have ups n downs so do i so get it right ! there was no hatin der!

sway nigga, ,, u should have replied to my flow , , dumbass dont reply to it in ur thread,,, u should have reply to it in my thread

...aight sway tak it eazy, i misread u, my bad dawg....peace eazy

bash! what u mean by in urz? im new to this site i have no clue what im doin! i dont even kno how to check my messages! im like lost teach me how to do this dawg

tight drop G, could been longer great vocab used.

cheak this g
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...yea