topical verse from this other site..about conqurin fear.....let me get y'alls feedback on this....pz


wanna know what my fears are...it's endin up mendin scuffs like my peers y'all
locked up off hard luck...pushed to the edge and forced to a fierce fall
pierced hearts....cuz fear can penetrate deeper than swords and daggers
deplored disaster....cuz when doubt unload it takes hold with a force when captured
but factor how i maintain...cuz when my brain waves creates a sea in which the pain drains
drownin in my sorrow....i swallow the tears cuz moral helps me stay brave
with a str8 face i've slayed fate....when the game of life mighta dealt me a false hand
and made me fear the unseen, like the sun beams disapeared from a small glance
but nothing shines brighter than joy to overcome.....even as a homeless bum
cause as a hopless son i was left to depend on my own then dun
sitting by my bed side at night.....hearin my mother cries made me wanna dread life
razor in my plam left me embalmed in sweat thinkin which vein would be my death slice
i had no option..it was either drop dead or face life as a boy when my pops left
my fears made each steps to succeed a "trip" to jail as a record of every loss kept
it's not like i lost step.....but i felt overwhelmed by the world around me
a lost soul left to mock hope when god turned his face and frowned b
in bulidings where knife fights turned deadly when fiends maim over baggies
the chipped paint on this place overlooks thoughts of worthlessness i'd trade gladly
scene that impaled my dome with doubt...frightened i wouldn't amount to nothing
slingin black tops on the block was something i found disgusting
and tho my acts bred shamelessness....the will to survive is what really saved this kid
i had to sit myself down and soul search to release all the fear and the pain within
and tamed the sins that fear sows.....for tears flowed i found reasons to cheer tho
so here goes....the conquering of uncertainty as i've paved my way with no hero

dawg you're Madd ill dawg , , , i will be keepin an eye on u dawg , , , , , tight drop

that was mad, it started off hell sick, keep postin shit up like that i wana read mo,




yo hit my shit up its called "Remaning Unrecognized Part 2 n part 3"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43639

good looks for the love y'all, i appreciate it...



uppin this still

still uppin this for the sleepy heads

Bash, man stop freeposting u say the same thing for every open mic!!!!!!!!

anyway, ur first line started off strong cept for the "yall" at the end..... but other than that it was pretty strong

i don't see how you thought "y'all" was bad....


blah...to each his own i guess.......good looks on the feedback tho


still uppin this