dis fo ma fallen soulja its kinda long but worth readin in ma eyes

yo we be buggin out at ma house drinkin smokin wit some dice/
den ma mom calls us in cuz she made us chicken n rice/
its twelve o clock in da morning n we bout ta head back outside/
our boys pull up n ask us if we wanna go fo a lil ride/
we said no cuz we fo got OPIE had no way back/
we also didnt actually think that these fags would attack/
so dey drove off n we went back to do our thing/
its twelve thirty n from ma bedroom window u hear ma gurl sing/
we started to laugh den drew a map of our rivals spots/
plannin to merk dese bitches in every place damn they got lots/
time passes fast n its like twelve forty five wat we gonna do now/
so we go back inside run some ps2 n pazito's alarm goes off but how/
so we run outside to investigate da seen n check on his mom/
i have a bad feelin now cuz ders sweat in ma palm/
we go inside search fo her n she's alright n everythings all good/
OPIE turns to me n says "see kno one will ever fuck wit us in our hood"/
so we go back to ma house cuz its only two houses away/
n dats da place everyone knos dat Los Solidos stay/
it's one o clock now ma gurl says she wants to go to bed/
so we say peace n dey go home but walkin wit opie neva crossed ma head/
cuz he only lives three blocks down n i thought everything would be cool/
damn yo now in ma head i feel like im da biggest fool/
ma spic walkin home all alone n gets shot down by da rival crew/
now he is up in heaven if only god knew/
a piece of ma heart is gone n now we ready to merk these bitches/
but we kno dat der whole block is full of dirty snitches/
so we waited fo tha right day n it has finally come/
ima put so many bullets through these kids it'll leave ma finger numb/
we planned this well now not one of us are missin/
we left these fags on tha floor jus reminicin/
we got them thinkin now that wat they did was wrong n dey r right/
cuz now fo da rest of these spics lives it will be a battle or a fight/
most of those fags died n got wat they deserved but it aint over/
cuz we gona go back n finish em off in style wit a black range rover/
tomorow da beef wil be dealt wit n OPIE will always remain in ma heart/
even wen he was here everyone knew u could neva tear us two apart/
i understand that god has taken ma boy outta love/
n everyday we pour outa a lil liquor n sometimes let loose a white dove/
Ima get a tatoo in ya name but right now ima carve it wit a knife/
so Rest In Peace Big Opie better known as Ricardo Diaz ma family for life/

give me ya feed back thanx

Good drop , , but it could have been better dawg

iight thanks dawg hit me up wit wut could be beter

nice drop. sorry bout the bad news but if it makes you feel any better i lost my homie the other day too. keep spittin

thanks dawg man sorry ta hear dat yo

Damn tight drop emotional peice Dawg....u still a fam even u aint wit us...feel me......Welll like they say we gain new ppl and loose a few...feel me....

Thats how life goessssssssssssssssssssssss

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yeye i feel ya thanks dawg

nice rhyme dog thats one emotional drop sorry bout ya homeboy opie.

thanx dawg

very emotional drop man i was feeling it man i had to cope with loosing homeys too and its hard..keep ya head up high kid and make ya homey proud...and lets hope god looks after him man

keep up with the rhymes man u got skill no doubt

return the fav n peep my new joint "times are tough"

pz

FA SHO DAWG

good piece keep spitten im outtie 5gs~1~
Pz.

it was emotinal for real...sorry for you dawg...im feelin you , but back on the piece it was a little basic...had an ok flow, need some elevation in bringin it need better vocab and shit, ...but still ok drop dawg

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Fuck you

Nice Drop

Keep elivatin 6/10

can ya'll return the favour

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Nice vobac
Sick flow
Multies werent realy good
Nice complexity


peace