HOOK:YOU DONT WANT IT,
YOU JUST FRONTED,
SAID IT I DEAD IT-
LET YOU LIVE TO REGRET IT-
makeng know centz AINT THE NAME IT'S WHAT IM REPPIN-
FROM HERE TILL IM CAMATOSE OR EXPOSED TO HEAVEN-
I REFUSE TO DO IN 49 WHAT I COULD DO IN 7-


im full charged like a goldiggers visa-
this rapper strokes perfect KEYS like i was fingering ALICIA-
im the mixture between licidic,acidic, rap clones mimic-bite my style and spit it- like they were reject no limit-
I CANT BE CLONED-ON MICROPHONES- monotone-rappers get they baratones ripped and left bitch like i force fed them hormones-
fag rapers meet with the chrome-while dickridering bitches can tell me i suck ,and swallow the XY chromosone-
murderous on mics my criminal career is 3 time felon-with rhymes so hot it could give you wesley snipes skin melon-I DONT RAP I BRING A RHYTHM TO REBELLION- for other hellions-
like myself-who spit flames and turn our vocal boothes to hell-
pimp werds and verbs a lyrical martyr- maken lesbians come harder-when they dream of me fucking they lover or partner.
spit into the mic seduction to an ill wonder-allure rhymes to secure fucking mics i should have my own 1-900 numder-
cocky conceided-bastard twice as hazed when im blazed and weeded-
rappen-is like grapplen- you know i cant be seen like FORESTS in MANHATTAN-
was challenged to be ill above that i killed it-got the rap game sown like a flag sport it like it was quilted-
this site-gave me 0-2 in my last fights-that's only because a netcee realize he could never be me in real life- you cats is dickriders to your oys to get them hype- but i kill you all on KEYBOARDS im just that TYPE-
in the lab with UNIQUE 1-diagnosing careers dead just for fun-
i turn the lights out in your head when i fire shots with no guns-
POP BUBBLES THROUGH MY GUMS-on some metaphorical shit-scream im better than you that aint no similie it's the facts from my lips.

HOOK:YOU DONT WANT IT,
YOU JUST FRONTED,
SAID IT I DEAD IT-
LET YOU LIVE TO REGRET IT-
makeng know centz AINT THE NAME IT'S WHAT IM REPPIN-
FROM HERE TILL IM CAMATOSE OR EXPOSED TO HEAVEN-
I REFUSE TO DO IN 49 WHAT I COULD DO IN 7-

damn hommie, shit was ill.. the flow was hot, vocab was like the best I seen for a while, wordplay was lacing this piece.. one of your best 4-sho, "this rapper strokes perfect KEYS like i was fingering ALICIA-
im the mixture between licidic,acidic, rap clones mimic-bite my style and spit it- like they were reject no limit-" <---- the alicia keys part was funny as hell..

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you know this shit was hott....

you drop illness almost on the daily basis....

thanx uppin

man this kat always be droppin hot shit namsayin...Word you got my respect always...verbals were off the meat rack on this and punches were there as usual...respect dunny...wahid

yo nice ish killa

nice structure wordplay overall good drop ya mean..........


a yo drop a reply in mines killa

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43961

stop posting this ill shit and let other cats shine.
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Nice shit yo

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